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    • marked001M Offline
      marked001
      last edited by

      ..few quick images of a small basement jazz club. SketchUp/Thea/Pshop


      JazzClub_V1 051413.png


      JazzClub_V2 051413.png


      JazzClub_V3 051413.png

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      • cheddaC Offline
        chedda
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        Good images, but the people are a problem imho. I think the blurred transparent person is best. It's a tricky thing at that range & detail.

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          wtrouser
          last edited by

          Great shots... love the lighting and composition choices. The woman in that last shot looks either tipsy and/or incredibly bored with her date πŸ˜„

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          • marked001M Offline
            marked001
            last edited by

            yes, people are always my big downfall... I definitely don't spend enough time blending them in (or just don't have the skill!). I haven't looked at these since I completed them and looking at them now the people really really stick out.

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            instagram: revi21on

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            • DanielD Offline
              Daniel
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              Nice renderings, Jason. Design-wise, I think those lights on the bench backs are problematic - people will brush up against them, or lean back on to them.

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                andyc
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                Lovely interior, and FWIW, your people aren't that far off the mark... compared to some of the awful stuff we see in some achitectural renderings πŸ˜„

                I thought you might find this link interesting and helpful (i know i did)

                http://vyonyx.com/tutorial11-blur-matters/

                A.

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                  wtrouser
                  last edited by

                  @andyc said:

                  FWIW, your people aren't that far off the mark...

                  πŸ‘ Yeah I hope my comment wasn't taken as a crit... I just liked the expression on the face of the woman you chose. I think the people look almost NPR stylized-ish and I dig it a lot.

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                  • RichardR Offline
                    Richard
                    last edited by

                    Jaz club or lonely hearts club?? Is that girl in the last image dreaming of me? I know most of them do!

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                    • marked001M Offline
                      marked001
                      last edited by

                      I think she just might be, Richard.

                      Andy..thanks for that link, that's great. Thanks for the critiques, guys.. I'll keep trying with the people.

                      http://www.revision21vis.com

                      instagram: revi21on

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                        nickenzyme
                        last edited by

                        Good job!
                        Woman in last picture looks like Robb's mother 😎

                        Life is not about waiting for the storms to pass... It's about learning how to dance in the rain!

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