First complete scene
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Hi, I'm not sure where to post in order to get some critique or comments so I have opened a post.
This is my first complete scene (SU model,Vray render,Photoshop post process) from the movie Doubt, the idea was to learn and practice so tried to save time by not having to design but still took me quite some time and efford.Any comments,critiques are welcome.
Many thanks
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It's quite beautiful.
My suggestions would be the arch in the hall seems to be a little harsh, I can see what I think are the polys making the arch. smoothing it might help.
The ceiling paint seems a bit brighter than the original. I would imagine the original has a hue of dinge to it.
Other than that the only other thing I could offer would be the floor seems a bit perfect for the period and setting. I don't know how it could be done but waves or scuffs or both would lend realism.
all in all I would have to be told it was not real or else I would instantly believe it to be a photo. All the details on the walls and such. masterful work.
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Thanks a lot for your prompt reply Krisidious.
You right! will try your suggestions.thx for the tip about waves or scuffs. -
Wow! Nice. Agree that it needs some dirt & wear & tear
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Thank you jpalm32 yes it need more realism, not happy with the display cabinet because was having problem with 'funny' bluish refelctions with vray also the floor looks to clean but it does on the picture as well. will make some changes following suggestions.
Could some one tell me if there is a specific place in this forums to put this kind of post? will like to share more and help other people if I can.
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