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    • S Offline
      Scostumatu
      last edited by

      Hi all - just thought id share a render i did for a client... would like to know your thoughts

      using SU and vray + PS


      Final-Jpeg_vig.jpg

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      • DanielD Offline
        Daniel
        last edited by

        You sure got a purty rendrin'...I likes it!

        Wondering about the paved area on the right - is it a patio? If it is, you might want to add some furniture. It seems like a lot of empty paving.

        The brick on the front facade needs to be adjusted to the right - you have vertical mortar joints on the corner (kudos for getting the coursing lined up with the window/door heads, though). You might also think about adding sills to those windows.

        My avatar is an anachronism.

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        • cheddaC Offline
          chedda
          last edited by

          Looks great especially the saturation and balance of colour.

          Kraken Wrangler https://www.flickr.com/photos/132441293@N03/

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          • EarthMoverE Offline
            EarthMover
            last edited by

            Nice dramatic tonality to this image. Great work. Perhaps the sky could be a bit more blue and the lights a bit more yellow to push the drama factor even further. Overall...great image. Agreed with the defining of the space on the right.

            3D Artist at Clearstory 3D Imaging
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              Scostumatu
              last edited by

              thanks for the feedback guys - appreciated 😄

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                khanhvu86
                last edited by

                nice render ... ^^

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                  seven.sides
                  last edited by

                  Very nice, I like the moodiness of the sky, good for contrast with the subject, makes it stand out. A few details, but others have picked them up. Nothing that jumps out though. Hope your client likes it.

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                    davidh
                    last edited by

                    Very nice and very clean.
                    The sky might work better if it was flipped horizontally,that way you would have the dark clouds accentuated against the 2 outside lights.It would also pick up the reflected light on the right hand gable which seems to suggest the brightest part of the sky is to the right.

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