External render for client
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Hi all - just thought id share a render i did for a client... would like to know your thoughts
using SU and vray + PS

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You sure got a purty rendrin'...I likes it!
Wondering about the paved area on the right - is it a patio? If it is, you might want to add some furniture. It seems like a lot of empty paving.
The brick on the front facade needs to be adjusted to the right - you have vertical mortar joints on the corner (kudos for getting the coursing lined up with the window/door heads, though). You might also think about adding sills to those windows.
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Looks great especially the saturation and balance of colour.
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Nice dramatic tonality to this image. Great work. Perhaps the sky could be a bit more blue and the lights a bit more yellow to push the drama factor even further. Overall...great image. Agreed with the defining of the space on the right.
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thanks for the feedback guys - appreciated

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nice render ... ^^
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Very nice, I like the moodiness of the sky, good for contrast with the subject, makes it stand out. A few details, but others have picked them up. Nothing that jumps out though. Hope your client likes it.
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Very nice and very clean.
The sky might work better if it was flipped horizontally,that way you would have the dark clouds accentuated against the 2 outside lights.It would also pick up the reflected light on the right hand gable which seems to suggest the brightest part of the sky is to the right.
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With your input, this post could be even better π
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