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    agf83
    last edited by 22 Jan 2010, 19:00

    im new in the forum this is my first topic , is a interior restaurant and living-bar
    sketchup+vray+photopaint i need the critics forum


    interior restaurant

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      agf83
      last edited by 22 Jan 2010, 19:08

      attach the other


      living-bar interior

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        majid
        last edited by 22 Jan 2010, 19:39

        verry welcome πŸ‘ nice start/renders

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          massimo Moderator
          last edited by 22 Jan 2010, 21:18

          Hi and welcome. They look good πŸ‘ . Some comments: the bump/normal of the bricks in the first image is reversed and I would like more soft shadows coming from the window's light and non tiling textures in the second image. Oh and both images are a bit too grainy.

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            agf83
            last edited by 24 Jan 2010, 03:31

            tks massimo and majid im agree the images are grainy, but i dont know what is the paramemter to fix
            appreciate the coments

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              ScottPara
              last edited by 25 Jan 2010, 02:27

              The first image really need some work with the textures. Some obvious items such as tiling should have been addressed before even rendering. The lighting work is nice. Overall the scene is too perfect. Seating is perfectly placed with no variation which lends itself to an unrealistic feel. Not sure what the item on the right is (chrome bar)?

              The second image suffers from some of the same items as the first. The texturing needs work. The couch has an odd stain/shadow/bad texturing...not sure what is it. For this image the couch needs to be a much better couch model. It is far too low poly with unrealistic pillows. The bottles and glasses need texture work as they look flat and incorrect.

              Overall these are not bad starts but could use a good but of work none the less.

              Scott

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                olishea
                last edited by 25 Jan 2010, 15:32

                nice work. but what's with hairy carpets at the moment?! i agree with more passes, too grainy...and yes shadows too hard for the light conditions. still though, nice work.

                oli

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                  FoXar
                  last edited by 28 Jan 2010, 17:58

                  Nice I really like the second one, although the sofa could've been a bit more detailed, ditto for the windows, but still great images! Keep it up ;D

                  Cheers ;D

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                    Fletch
                    last edited by 30 Jan 2010, 02:21

                    first image:
                    bump on floor doesn't look right.
                    sparkles on lights more distracting than convincing. perhaps you could make it more subtle.

                    great work, keep 'em coming!

                    Fletch
                    Twilight Render Cross-platform Plugin for SketchUp on PC or Mac

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                      agf83
                      last edited by 7 Feb 2010, 06:38

                      scotppara,foxar,olishea: tks for the coments im agree about them, im working the textures, but i need help with the shadows, how can i do a realistic shadows?

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                        D-space
                        last edited by 7 Feb 2010, 09:27

                        @agf83 said:

                        tks massimo and majid im agree the images are grainy, but i dont know what is the paramemter to fix
                        appreciate the coments

                        Very nice render, esp the first. πŸ˜„
                        I'm just asking if you got the Absolut bottle from the Warehouse?
                        I'm looking for the same type of bottle, a much better version from the warehouse.
                        Any ideas?

                        About the noise, hope I am give you tips, but I don't render with Vray. πŸ˜‰
                        But try looking for noise threshold, probably lowering them will help.

                        http://blibestmentalt.no/54981

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