La loft revisited

solo · 9 Jul 2008, 02:42

Very nice image, very pleasing to the eye.

tomsdesk · 9 Jul 2008, 03:14

Indeed! The bold red on the right, whispered again on the left, (and then hushed up in the left foreground) works really well I think. (And I love the contray corner on that lovely rug...serves them right for being so obscenely rich :`)

gaganraj · 9 Jul 2008, 04:09

thanks guys! i'm glad the slightly stylized sensibilities seem to be coming across.

deathcloud · 9 Jul 2008, 04:19

wow sir this is good where do you use your renderings? are you a graphic artist?

johnsenior1973 · 9 Jul 2008, 04:27

I may be in a very small minority here, but I preferred the space when it was just the sofas. Then the view was everything and it was a breathtaking space. A space that only the ultra-rich could afford, but that's one of the many perks of being ultra-rich.

To critique this render. The rug is curling up way too much, and personally I don't think someone who can afford this type of place would be accepting of a rug curling up like that. Another problem is the way the light in the room doesn't match the light outside.

gaganraj · 9 Jul 2008, 04:53

thanks again for the feedback. All encouraging and helpfull.

i'm a concept artist for film/tv/video games.

i agree with you on the minimalist room vs. populated ( i preferred the stark room)....but the vast majority disagreed with me so i listened and put some stuff in there.

i've made the light inside extremely warm vs. a cooler bg just to push the effect and separation, but if it is too much i can normalize the light more and even it out. thoughts?

re: the carpet...well...i was just being a little playful. and also, its a bit of a device to point to the focal point of the piece which is the girl.

plot-paris · 9 Jul 2008, 10:47

I really like this new render. especially the plants outside are absolutely to my favour (and the woman of course )

tinanne · 9 Jul 2008, 22:32

This is very beautiful. It has a dreamy romantic quality. I REALLY like it.

I do agree about the rug (although I can appreciate a little playfulness )

My only critic are the tree on the building? It seems that this is a highrise, were you envisioning a deck of some sort out there? If so, there would be railing and the trees probably wouldn't be so close to the building.

fewdavid · 10 Jul 2008, 16:00

I think background is scare feeling I think in model don't have rail?

gaganraj · 10 Jul 2008, 18:46

made a few slight changes based on a lot of feedback from different sources.

thanks for the feedback, compliments and crits.

I tried to cool off the interior light so it matched the BG a bit better. Toned down the carpet flip and flipped the canvas for a bit better compositional read. (this is a fun/fantasy piece so i don't have a design doc. to adhere to)

The space was supposed to be less 'high-rise' and more 'swanky pad on the hill' so i figured it had some sort of green roof and vines growing up the walls.

thanks again for all the feedback!