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    majid
    last edited by 22 May 2008, 22:12

    at the moment this is my best render :

    http://i28.tinypic.com/2qdwxe8.jpg

    modeled in su and rendered using kt . just 2 background trees are 2d and all other objects are 3d ... render preset 17 over 6 hours @2000*2900 pixel... no post pro

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      Edson
      last edited by 22 May 2008, 22:33

      great work, majid. no wonder you are proud of it.

      edson mahfuz, architect| porto alegre • brasil
      http://www.mahfuz.arq.br

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        marked001
        last edited by 23 May 2008, 00:02

        great job with the grass in between the tiles..

        http://www.revision21vis.com

        instagram: revi21on

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          dolphus
          last edited by 23 May 2008, 11:05

          spectacular i like the palm the most it seem to be waving in the breeze great 😍

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            Frederik
            last edited by 23 May 2008, 14:38

            It sure looks nice, Majid... 😄

            But I'm still not really happy with the plaster texture you've used... 😐
            I guess the material isn't made with bump, fresnel etc...
            I have sent you a plaster material (by PM) you can try to work with and apply in KT...
            As an alternative you can visit Arroway, where I'm sure you can find some really nice plasters... 😉

            Final note will be on the pool water material...
            That pool sure looks deep... To me it looks like an ocean... 😲
            So please change the water material to another material... 😉

            Any way... I couldn't resist, so I played a little with your image using Sqirlz...
            (Hint - look at the pool water... 😉 )

            http://www.kerkythea.org/users/frederik/images/Majid-animation.gif

            I hope you take the above as constructive critique...
            I just want to help you improve your renders...!! 😄

            Cheers
            Kim Frederik

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              majid
              last edited by 23 May 2008, 23:36

              so sorry for my late reply ... i was on a trip... and thanx again for all kind words and feedbacks ,.@ Frederik : i'll do a review on the render soon 😄
              yours

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                kwistenbiebel
                last edited by 23 May 2008, 23:50

                Majid,
                Congrats my friend.
                The image is simply stunning.
                What a color orgy this one is. It's great.

                The only minor crit besides being splendid in all ways, is indeed the plaster texture.
                I think it just needs to be scaled down a little and it will be perfectomundo.

                Really really great job, both in light as in texturing and the chosen point of view.

                Regards,
                Kwistenbiebel

                @Frederick,
                Nice water animation , sir. There are some .jpg (or should I say .gif) artifacts in the sky. But I guess you were limited in file size so you had to lower quality.

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                  Frederik
                  last edited by 24 May 2008, 05:57

                  @kwistenbiebel said:

                  @Frederick, Nice water animation

                  Thanks..!! 😄

                  @kwistenbiebel said:

                  There are some .jpg (or should I say .gif) artifacts in the sky. But I guess you were limited in file size so you had to lower quality.

                  Exactly... The original animation was 4,48Mb, so to reduce the size I had to compress it heavily, which then mean a lower quality... 😞
                  Well - you'll get some, you'll loose some... 😉

                  Cheers
                  Kim Frederik

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                    PKast
                    last edited by 24 May 2008, 06:48

                    Majid, that's beatiful, you certainly bring an artist's eye to your compositions.

                    Best,

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                      majid
                      last edited by 28 May 2008, 07:39

                      thanx all for all comment and kind words, here is last render ... ( finally i made a layered material for water pool so now i can controll it,..
                      and ahere are components that i made ... oter components are from 3dwarehouse 😄

                      http://i27.tinypic.com/28lxgft.jpg


                      su.zip

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                        kwistenbiebel
                        last edited by 28 May 2008, 13:34

                        Gorgeous sparkling colors 😲

                        (a little crit on the new water though: the bump map used makes it look as if it has a thin layer of ice on top.Maybe look for another bump map?)

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                          igor
                          last edited by 28 May 2008, 13:58

                          uh, wait, hold on a sec. let me pick my jaw up off the floor.
                          that's an amazing render majid, well done!
                          my only problems with it are in the details:
                          the roof top seems to be weathered (grime and stuff coming down), but the rest of the building looks brand new.
                          and yes, the pool water looks like its frozen over.

                          but, all in all, thats a great render. better than anything ive done. keep going!

                          The genius switch has no "off" position
                          Intelegence is natrual, it takes real effort to be ignorant

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                            pacha
                            last edited by 30 Jun 2008, 06:01

                            Great Work Majid. I like the grass between the tiles; how did you make it??? can you share it please.

                            Also, I want to ask Frederik about the way he could make the water move, it's great 👍

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                              Gaieus
                              last edited by 30 Jun 2008, 06:17

                              Hi Pacha,

                              I believe the grass is some image with clipmap (or alpha mask as Kerkythea can now handle that as well).

                              The moving water was made with Sqirlz Water Reflections and saved as a GIF animation.

                              Gai...

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                                majid
                                last edited by 30 Jun 2008, 07:57

                                hi Gaieus
                                yes the grass is a face ( i have made a grass pack and shared it over kt forum - do u can find it as " low res grass pack" ) whit clipmap . then i used it as a brush , nad selected the below color as canvas . kt has a great INSTANCING BRUSH tool , u can paint an object as a BRUSH over another one as CANVAS .
                                i used the same method to make flowers too
                                urs majid

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                                  rcossoli
                                  last edited by 30 Jun 2008, 21:38

                                  yes, the last image is much better in terms of lighting and textures, I congratulate you and thank you for plants.

                                  THREEDIMENSIONSWEB dot COM

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