Villa ویلا

[Frederik]

It sure looks nice, Majid...

But I'm still not really happy with the plaster texture you've used...
I guess the material isn't made with bump, fresnel etc...
I have sent you a plaster material (by PM) you can try to work with and apply in KT...
As an alternative you can visit Arroway, where I'm sure you can find some really nice plasters...

Final note will be on the pool water material...
That pool sure looks deep... To me it looks like an ocean...
So please change the water material to another material...

Any way... I couldn't resist, so I played a little with your image using Sqirlz...
(Hint - look at the pool water... )

I hope you take the above as constructive critique...
I just want to help you improve your renders...!!

[majid]

so sorry for my late reply ... i was on a trip... and thanx again for all kind words and feedbacks ,.@ Frederik : i'll do a review on the render soon
yours

[kwistenbiebel]

Majid,
Congrats my friend.
The image is simply stunning.
What a color orgy this one is. It's great.

The only minor crit besides being splendid in all ways, is indeed the plaster texture.
I think it just needs to be scaled down a little and it will be perfectomundo.

Really really great job, both in light as in texturing and the chosen point of view.

Regards,
Kwistenbiebel

@Frederick,
Nice water animation , sir. There are some .jpg (or should I say .gif) artifacts in the sky. But I guess you were limited in file size so you had to lower quality.

[Frederik]

@kwistenbiebel said:

@Frederick, Nice water animation

Thanks..!!

@kwistenbiebel said:

There are some .jpg (or should I say .gif) artifacts in the sky. But I guess you were limited in file size so you had to lower quality.

Exactly... The original animation was 4,48Mb, so to reduce the size I had to compress it heavily, which then mean a lower quality...
Well - you'll get some, you'll loose some...

[PKast]

Majid, that's beatiful, you certainly bring an artist's eye to your compositions.

Best,

[majid]

thanx all for all comment and kind words, here is last render ... ( finally i made a layered material for water pool so now i can controll it,..
and ahere are components that i made ... oter components are from 3dwarehouse

---

su.zip

[kwistenbiebel]

Gorgeous sparkling colors

(a little crit on the new water though: the bump map used makes it look as if it has a thin layer of ice on top.Maybe look for another bump map?)

[igor]

uh, wait, hold on a sec. let me pick my jaw up off the floor.
that's an amazing render majid, well done!
my only problems with it are in the details:
the roof top seems to be weathered (grime and stuff coming down), but the rest of the building looks brand new.
and yes, the pool water looks like its frozen over.

but, all in all, thats a great render. better than anything ive done. keep going!

[pacha]

Great Work Majid. I like the grass between the tiles; how did you make it??? can you share it please.

Also, I want to ask Frederik about the way he could make the water move, it's great

[Gaieus]

Hi Pacha,

I believe the grass is some image with clipmap (or alpha mask as Kerkythea can now handle that as well).

The moving water was made with Sqirlz Water Reflections and saved as a GIF animation.

[majid]

hi Gaieus
yes the grass is a face ( i have made a grass pack and shared it over kt forum - do u can find it as " low res grass pack" ) whit clipmap . then i used it as a brush , nad selected the below color as canvas . kt has a great INSTANCING BRUSH tool , u can paint an object as a BRUSH over another one as CANVAS .
i used the same method to make flowers too
urs majid

[rcossoli]

yes, the last image is much better in terms of lighting and textures, I congratulate you and thank you for plants.