A few comments:
When showing renders it is always nice to know what render engine you are using. That way when people are offering comments and crits they can reference the abilities of the rendering software being used.
That being said....the texturing needs some work. There is some really bad repeating in the wood textures.
Showing furniture or anything else on a black background make the image lose all depth.
I think those are plants shown on top of the shelves. If they are I would get rid of them or get better ones. Those (in their poor quality) add nothing to the image.
The pink walls are really distracting
Scott