Church sketch

allanx

Hi to everyone,

Here is a project I've done last week, 3D model and some renderings.....

Hope you all like it...

Thanks,

allanx

sample 1.jpg

sample 2.jpg

sample 3.jpg

mirjman

really nice npr renders! I like the contrast of the sky with the white siding, and the glass is really convincing. What is the material on the left building in the last render? It looks like battens on top of white bricks. The only other comment I have is that the roof texture on the left in the second render is repeating enough to distract the eye.

david57

Nice work.

allanx

Thanks, yes its wood battens on brick wall... yeah the roofs kinda annoying I'm still looking for a work around bringing a huge tilable images to replace it but it slows the model down...

Thanks again mirjman and david57 for the nice comments...

allanx

sketchy

Great presentation of the lines of the building. Pleasing overall as well. The composition of the second one with the grass is great, it provides interest but keeps the attention on the building.

allanx

Thanks sketchy for the very nice comment, yeah my client likes the second one too because of the grass thing in front...

Thanks,

allanx

ScottPara

Allanx,

These are quite nice. My only comment would be that the trees really take away from what is a great presentation. They are almost to sketchy or unrealistic in my opinion. The building itself is great but really need some attention to the landscaping. Please continue to post.

Scott

allanx

Thanks scottpara for the nice suggestion, I have alot of images to post this coming year...I'll compile them and post them here..

Thanks again,

allanx

Gaieus

Actually I don't mind the sketchy trees - nor the silhouette people - they are obviously put there as illustration and to give a scale to the main thing - the building. Mixing styles to emphasize the main subject can be a nice way to present things.

But of course, tastes are different and all tha contributions here can result in an aven better final output.

allanx

Thanks Gaieus, I'm taking all criticisms possitibly to improve my style...

Happy Holidays,

allanx