Old abandoned Wolkswagen Bus
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Render: SU podium Version 2
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Looks pretty good but needs some work yet. If you really want it to look abandoned, here are some suggestions. The bus has weathering on the blue section, but nowhere else, you need to weather the roof, the wheels, the whole thing, not just one section. How about a mismatched wheel, and perhaps some leaves and debris on the roof. The windows should be dirty, maybe one or two broken or cracked. Maybe some misc debris on the ground.
The scenes are too light, should be a bit darker overall. It's sitting in bright sunlight, the shadows would be much darker.
In the first scene the plants make the bus look like a toy. Some more variety with the plants would help, or at least make them vary in size, and a more random distribution of them - groups here and there.
These are just a few observations off the top of my head.
And did you create the bus? If not, you should give credit to whoever did.
Well, you asked for it
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Nice model, but needs some work to convey "old and abandoned."
Those tires look too good to leave on an abandoned vehicle.
I would expect to see some more rust and dirt on the vehicle. -
Nice bus. Looks cleaner than my car, especially the windows.
Better get it out of that sand. I remember digging mine out of a beach once. Barely made it.
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