Venecija

momy_21

Hi
i want to share with you guys this render
which i got the model from warehouse and
add materials on it using vray.
so, C&C are welcome

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Daniel

Good beginning, but could use some improvement, such as:

Using different materials/textures/colors on the buildings, so they aren't identical.
Adjusting the wood grain to run in teh correct direction on different elements.
Better sky image.

tadema

Hello moayed, your render looks canny but you really need to work on your textures a little more. The little things stick out to spoil a scene, the wood grain on your boats are in the wrong orientation and your bricks need scaling correctly. Small things like adding joints to the coping and giving it a over-hang will make all the difference. Please don't take this as criticism, it's not meant that way.
regards John

SketchUpNoobie

Are those the wires showing in the crack on the top of the leftmost building?

Great start though.

solo

moayed

There are a lot of things you could do to improve the render, how about this:

You upload the model and folks here that have the time can render it (and do some fixes) that way you can see what they do that makes it look more realistic, and not only you but others can also learn from it.

momy_21

i want to thank you all for your comments
and i'm going to share the model
so, me & others can learn and get some improvement advises
thank you Solo for the idea

here is the file
http://www.4shared.com/file/PiRaP0q_/venecija.html?