My first ever render!
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Hey guys,
Well I've been slowly teaching myself Twilight render and think I'm sloooowwwllly getting there. Attached is the first effort that I've been reasonable happy with and just thought I'd post up here after getting lots of advice on the TR forums. (This is a totally made up scene btw)
I'd really love to recieve any criticisms/thoughts (shoot from the hip - I'm here to learn) so I can improve in my next renders - I'm bored of this one and itching to model something else!
Cheers.
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Lee you've certainly got the glass and the outside view spot on, the room maybe a little sparse and maybe better chairs IMHO. Great for your first render, now your addicted
john -
I second the glass and the external scene - they are brilliant. It needs something more in the room - the furniture is a bit sparse. For a first render I take my hat off to you sir.
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Thanks chaps, yeah, there is definitely room for improvement and will address your comments on my next attempt!
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First? You could have fooled me.
Very nice. Only thing missing is the tea/coffee tray.
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Thankys, Bryan. Tea + Biscuits are definitely missing!
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