When the sun arises
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Hi guys. Morning this time.
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u want crits:
at the moment the render has a blue overcast...i know its morning but try adding some warmth/oranges/yellows so it doesnt come across as cold. you can do this as post process or by using a slightly yellow/orange sun. also try bringing some more sun into the image...would be better if it illuminated the 'promenade' of trees.
the viewing angle is not natural. its like you are taking the picture at first floor height. i mean whats the focus of the image? the parking entrance? is your fov still 35? give it a human scale by dropping the eye height.
if you wanna fit more of the towers in the image......you can 'rotate' the camera 90 degrees by holding alt and using orbit tool. it takes some practice but its good for portrait images of towers. you just have to rotate the image after rendering.
texture wise the floor looks a bit flat....have you bumped it? and the windows looks opaque still and kinda copper-like (unless they are supposed to be like this). if you wanna give the windows more transparency then make sure you have modeled (at least) the internal floors of the tower...just adds more realism.
I hope this helps
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Thanks for the advices, one question though. You mean rendering the internal floors and make the floorplates and the internal columns of the towers appear in the render?
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no....i mean just the floors. no columns walls/partitions furniture. literally just the floor slabs. 2 minute job.
its just so that if you do catch a glimpse of the interior the building will not appear hollow.
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Guys, do you like the parking entrance? I mean, the black colour that symbolizes the entrance, is it good, it senses reality?, or i should do something else with the entrances? To make the entrance, i just created a sketchup rectangle and painted it black, did i do the right thing, or should i do something else?
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The entrance is not realistic - you would wreck the bottom of the car driving into it - it is way too steep IMHO.
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