Render for C&C

EDMON242004

Hello everybody, posting a work for crits and comments. thanks
for c&c

majid

very nice render ... just it is a bit dark in shadows to my eye. keep going mate

olishea

I agree some detail seems to be lost in the shadows. maybe a bit of foreground interest?

getting there

solo

I dunno guys, it looks fantastic to me, looks like a photo actually. I'd only replace the blue car for something lighter if I had to, otherwise I really like the FOV and render.

michaliszissiou

Well done edmon Nice shadows, dark, a photorealistic render.

Frederik

I also like it very much and apart from the grass, I also see this as a good photorealistic render...
As always, I'm curious to know what render app. you've used for this one...

tomsdesk

+1 on the grass...looks a bit dodged out?
+1++ on everything else...lovely image!

brodie

Agree with what's been said for the most part. I'd switch out the blue car. The color seems unrealistic compared to the rest of the image. The grass, also looks too flat and bright.

As for the darkness in the shadows it doesn't both me, but it really depends on what the purpose of the rendering is. If the detail in there is important it might be worth brightening them up, otherwise I'd say leave it.

-Brodie

EDMON242004

Hi, thanks for the comments, I have attached another view of the project, showing only the first building, C&C are most welcome, thanks again.

Frederik

Guess you didn't see this...

@frederik said:

As always, I'm curious to know what render app. you've used for this one...

EDMON242004

Oh, I am sorry Fred, in this image I used VRAY for SU, with the default settings of IRM to High, postpro the sky and levels in Photo shop.

Fletch

The building part of the render looks great.

I would try to use the Random Scale and Rotate tool on the plants.
The postpro? for grass... needs the edges roughened up a bit...
Trees are repetitive as well.

EDMON242004

Thanks Fletch, could you point me out where I could get this random scale & rotate tool?

brodie

I suspect he was talking about randor from Smustard http://www.smustard.com/search/

It's $3. I've been meaning to buy it but haven't yet. Heard good things though.

-Brodie

broomstick

the second one is very well done, the grass looks awesome too.

In the first one, the grass on the foreground should be Photoshopped a bit, but the rest looks very very good

Nice work!