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    • F Offline
      fymoro
      last edited by

      Hi,

      This rendering takes me all the day to make the scene (column & trompet from sketchup web component)

      The most long for me beginner was to parameter the bump map, the light etc...

      I think that I start to be crazy for Sketchup and Vray.... 😎

      I wait your comments, Bye.


      direct from rendering, 20 minutes

      http://www.thearender.com/cms/index.php/news/featured-artists/137-frederic-yves-moro.html

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      • MALAISEM Offline
        MALAISE
        last edited by

        Hi Fymoro
        You're learning very fast. I'm not really the right one to comment this impressive Vray picture.
        May be you could improve the tiles positionning ( far left ).

        Friendly

        MALAISE 👍

        La Connaissance n'a de valeur que partagée

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          juanjo06
          last edited by

          MEN this is so nice. very good muy bueno felicidades! 👍 👍 👍
          the gold material really defined.

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          • F Offline
            fymoro
            last edited by

            Thanks,

            I will make some changes.

            The gold material is the "gold_shiny.vismat" in the Vray material editor.

            I think that for make a nice picture the position and The field of the view of the camera is very important. I put at 50'.

            I take my time, I follow tutorial and many discussion issue from this forum and It is very helpful... ☀

            Thanks for your comment.

            Fymoro

            http://www.thearender.com/cms/index.php/news/featured-artists/137-frederic-yves-moro.html

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            • P Offline
              perk
              last edited by

              fymoro

              I Think you have done a great job on this image, very realistic looking.

              I do agree that the tile on the far side need to be aligned and after hearing that comment I noticed that the tile on the near side is (slightly) misaligned as well. I agree that changing the field of view is an important thing but in this image the first thing I noticed is that the field of view is off a bit. To me, it looks as if the columns are leaning outward. I usually use a setting of 35. One last comment is that the trumpet appears to be floating just a bit. I think it would actually rest on three points, (for lack of better terms since I know nothing about musical instraments) I think the mouth piece would rest on the ground as well.

              Other then that, GREAT work!!

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