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  • F Offline
    fymoro
    last edited by 3 Jan 2009, 13:42

    Hi,

    This rendering takes me all the day to make the scene (column & trompet from sketchup web component)

    The most long for me beginner was to parameter the bump map, the light etc...

    I think that I start to be crazy for Sketchup and Vray.... ๐Ÿ˜Ž

    I wait your comments, Bye.


    direct from rendering, 20 minutes

    http://www.thearender.com/cms/index.php/news/featured-artists/137-frederic-yves-moro.html

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      MALAISE
      last edited by 3 Jan 2009, 17:09

      Hi Fymoro
      You're learning very fast. I'm not really the right one to comment this impressive Vray picture.
      May be you could improve the tiles positionning ( far left ).

      Friendly

      MALAISE ๐Ÿ‘

      La Connaissance n'a de valeur que partagรฉe

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        juanjo06
        last edited by 3 Jan 2009, 20:01

        MEN this is so nice. very good muy bueno felicidades! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
        the gold material really defined.

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          fymoro
          last edited by 4 Jan 2009, 00:19

          Thanks,

          I will make some changes.

          The gold material is the "gold_shiny.vismat" in the Vray material editor.

          I think that for make a nice picture the position and The field of the view of the camera is very important. I put at 50'.

          I take my time, I follow tutorial and many discussion issue from this forum and It is very helpful... โ˜€

          Thanks for your comment.

          Fymoro

          http://www.thearender.com/cms/index.php/news/featured-artists/137-frederic-yves-moro.html

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            perk
            last edited by 4 Jan 2009, 01:57

            fymoro

            I Think you have done a great job on this image, very realistic looking.

            I do agree that the tile on the far side need to be aligned and after hearing that comment I noticed that the tile on the near side is (slightly) misaligned as well. I agree that changing the field of view is an important thing but in this image the first thing I noticed is that the field of view is off a bit. To me, it looks as if the columns are leaning outward. I usually use a setting of 35. One last comment is that the trumpet appears to be floating just a bit. I think it would actually rest on three points, (for lack of better terms since I know nothing about musical instraments) I think the mouth piece would rest on the ground as well.

            Other then that, GREAT work!!

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