Inside a shop (update)
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this is the last thing esoy working, is a series of courtyards meal for a large store here in my hometown, the problem was that I am presenting the edges of the roof that came out very burned and when they wanted to settle in photoshop I do not think I am very well, Look you who believe, greetings
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Nice render, only crit would be that the people look a bit flat. Perhaps turn down the saturation on the people to keep the focus on the interior a bit more.
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I have to agree with remus, the people do not add to the image right now. The guy off to the left looks to be almost floating. If the figures had a bit of a shadow that might help ground them but I think you could find higher quality samples of people.
Scott
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thanks for the comments and have reason about people, are not good and also some that appear to float jajaja, greetings
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I would very much like to see some light at the fast food counter. would brighten up the whole thing.
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Your work nice rendering butI think people drop down your work
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this is a recent picture of it takes, the idea was to try new things in the lighting, I think the main problem remains people, but the lighting left me satisfied
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The second image is really good. The clear problem is that the people have all been photographed in daylight so they stand out a mile.
I also think the chairs and tables need to be moved around. Everything looks too perfect. Every chair is perfectly aligned, the ketchup and mustard bottles and the menus are all positioned the same.
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john I think it was absolutely right regarding the chairs, the menu and especially the people, provided that settlement is a problem beyond me another jaja
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