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    • FrederikF Offline
      Frederik
      last edited by

      It sure looks nice, Majid... 😄

      But I'm still not really happy with the plaster texture you've used... 😐
      I guess the material isn't made with bump, fresnel etc...
      I have sent you a plaster material (by PM) you can try to work with and apply in KT...
      As an alternative you can visit Arroway, where I'm sure you can find some really nice plasters... 😉

      Final note will be on the pool water material...
      That pool sure looks deep... To me it looks like an ocean... 😲
      So please change the water material to another material... 😉

      Any way... I couldn't resist, so I played a little with your image using Sqirlz...
      (Hint - look at the pool water... 😉 )

      http://www.kerkythea.org/users/frederik/images/Majid-animation.gif

      I hope you take the above as constructive critique...
      I just want to help you improve your renders...!! 😄

      Cheers
      Kim Frederik

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      • majidM Offline
        majid
        last edited by

        so sorry for my late reply ... i was on a trip... and thanx again for all kind words and feedbacks ,.@ Frederik : i'll do a review on the render soon 😄
        yours

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          kwistenbiebel
          last edited by

          Majid,
          Congrats my friend.
          The image is simply stunning.
          What a color orgy this one is. It's great.

          The only minor crit besides being splendid in all ways, is indeed the plaster texture.
          I think it just needs to be scaled down a little and it will be perfectomundo.

          Really really great job, both in light as in texturing and the chosen point of view.

          Regards,
          Kwistenbiebel

          @Frederick,
          Nice water animation , sir. There are some .jpg (or should I say .gif) artifacts in the sky. But I guess you were limited in file size so you had to lower quality.

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          • FrederikF Offline
            Frederik
            last edited by

            @kwistenbiebel said:

            @Frederick, Nice water animation

            Thanks..!! 😄

            @kwistenbiebel said:

            There are some .jpg (or should I say .gif) artifacts in the sky. But I guess you were limited in file size so you had to lower quality.

            Exactly... The original animation was 4,48Mb, so to reduce the size I had to compress it heavily, which then mean a lower quality... 😞
            Well - you'll get some, you'll loose some... 😉

            Cheers
            Kim Frederik

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              PKast
              last edited by

              Majid, that's beatiful, you certainly bring an artist's eye to your compositions.

              Best,

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              • majidM Offline
                majid
                last edited by

                thanx all for all comment and kind words, here is last render ... ( finally i made a layered material for water pool so now i can controll it,..
                and ahere are components that i made ... oter components are from 3dwarehouse 😄

                http://i27.tinypic.com/28lxgft.jpg


                su.zip

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                  kwistenbiebel
                  last edited by

                  Gorgeous sparkling colors 😲

                  (a little crit on the new water though: the bump map used makes it look as if it has a thin layer of ice on top.Maybe look for another bump map?)

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                    igor
                    last edited by

                    uh, wait, hold on a sec. let me pick my jaw up off the floor.
                    that's an amazing render majid, well done!
                    my only problems with it are in the details:
                    the roof top seems to be weathered (grime and stuff coming down), but the rest of the building looks brand new.
                    and yes, the pool water looks like its frozen over.

                    but, all in all, thats a great render. better than anything ive done. keep going!

                    The genius switch has no "off" position
                    Intelegence is natrual, it takes real effort to be ignorant

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                      pacha
                      last edited by

                      Great Work Majid. I like the grass between the tiles; how did you make it??? can you share it please.

                      Also, I want to ask Frederik about the way he could make the water move, it's great 👍

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                      • GaieusG Offline
                        Gaieus
                        last edited by

                        Hi Pacha,

                        I believe the grass is some image with clipmap (or alpha mask as Kerkythea can now handle that as well).

                        The moving water was made with Sqirlz Water Reflections and saved as a GIF animation.

                        Gai...

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                        • majidM Offline
                          majid
                          last edited by

                          hi Gaieus
                          yes the grass is a face ( i have made a grass pack and shared it over kt forum - do u can find it as " low res grass pack" ) whit clipmap . then i used it as a brush , nad selected the below color as canvas . kt has a great INSTANCING BRUSH tool , u can paint an object as a BRUSH over another one as CANVAS .
                          i used the same method to make flowers too
                          urs majid

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                            rcossoli
                            last edited by

                            yes, the last image is much better in terms of lighting and textures, I congratulate you and thank you for plants.

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