My first render

szamot · 27 Apr 2008, 10:35

Hi, I want to show my first work. I am beginner . Please comments .

Sorry for my English

mateo soletic · 27 Apr 2008, 10:42

Sorry , it doesnt look like Your first render,
it looks more like Your 101 render. Great work.
What renderer did You use?

szamot · 27 Apr 2008, 12:54

ohh thx. This is my first render that looks on perfect me. I used Podium.

mike d · 27 Apr 2008, 15:07

very nice image
mike d

remus · 27 Apr 2008, 16:20

Great render.

If you want some picky criticisms:

A few more edges on the bottom of the speaker wouldnt go amiss. The material on the "creative" bit looks a bit weird, it might just be my imagination and finally, i reckon it would look nicer if it was zoomed out a bit ( i want to see more of this brilliant rendering!)

el.antuan · 27 Apr 2008, 17:10

Nice Render in deed!

Congratulations!!

P.S. (I never post any render yet, so I'm really scared)

Regards

igor · 27 Apr 2008, 19:21

like mateo soletic said, this doesnt look like a first render. ive been using poium for a while and mine arent that good yet!

congrats on being that good anyhow...

and like remus said, make the bottom of the speaker higher-poly (ie: more lines = smoother curve)

ScottPara · 28 Apr 2008, 01:25

I agree with Remus, this model just needs more faces so it is not so faceted. Great render though.

Scott

tomislavm · 28 Apr 2008, 08:28

For the firts time excellent !

szamot · 28 Apr 2008, 14:06

Thanks for notes. I will correct my error in free time.