My first render
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Hi, I want to show my first work. I am beginner . Please comments .
Sorry for my English
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Sorry , it doesnt look like Your first render,
it looks more like Your 101 render. Great work.
What renderer did You use? -
ohh thx. This is my first render that looks on perfect me. I used Podium.
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very nice image
mike d -
Great render.
If you want some picky criticisms:
A few more edges on the bottom of the speaker wouldnt go amiss. The material on the "creative" bit looks a bit weird, it might just be my imagination
and finally, i reckon it would look nicer if it was zoomed out a bit ( i want to see more of this brilliant rendering!) -
Nice Render in deed!
Congratulations!!
P.S. (I never post any render yet, so I'm really scared)
Regards
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like mateo soletic said, this doesnt look like a first render. ive been using poium for a while and mine arent that good yet!
congrats on being that good anyhow...
and like remus said, make the bottom of the speaker higher-poly (ie: more lines = smoother curve)
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I agree with Remus, this model just needs more faces so it is not so faceted. Great render though.
Scott
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For the firts time excellent !
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Thanks for notes. I will correct my error in free time.
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