3d Render challenge
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Hello,
please vote for my entry at the render challenge:
http://www.sketchuptextureclub.com/challenge/modern-office-building-24-12-2014/author/396
here's an additional video:
[youtube]8FHtE8ojtDk[/youtube]
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SU 2012?
Nice video.
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2015 of course.
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Done
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Thank you
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Hi Jochen,
Very cool render and video.
I have two comments if you don't mind:
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It's good to frame the image with trees, branches, leaves, etc. However, the foliage border should not take away the main focus which is the building. It would be better, composition wise, if the branches on the right were smaller. They almost take up 1/4 of the image and attract my eyes to them first rather than the building.
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Maybe make the interior lights brighter to attract the viewers' attention and make it clear that the main focus of the image if the building.
Best of luck!
_KN
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Thanks Ken,
you are absolutely right with your comments. I thought that by my self, while uploading the image. Unfortunately I've only had one day to do all the work and renderings and after uploading no more freetime was left, to fix these problems. But it was fun to take part anyway.
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Last day today.
Please vote for me.
http://www.sketchuptextureclub.com/challenge/modern-office-building-24-12-2014/author/396
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