Christmas morning
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Used/rough/worn wood floor is not noisy like that, it is usually worn on the edges and it is a bit wavy. Your bump is more suited for rusted metal than worn wood floor !

Try these http://www.enchantedage.com/node/185 .
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nice! thanks for the link ely!

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Nice image Carloh! really liked the mood and the contrast warm-cold of the lighting... I would use a softer shadow for that lamp...
best
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Thanks Victor
  I'll make another entry in this competition where i'll change the lighting  
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Hi Carloh:
Image has a lovely feel w/the village lights in the background. It definitely feels like Christmas morning. Comments by others give you excellent direction to improve this scene.
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get those lights on the christmas tree!

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Thank you all for your tips...i made the adjustments you suggested and i guess this will be my final entry in this competition


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Great improvements, Carloh...!

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@carloh said:
Thank you all for your tips...i made the adjustments you suggested and i guess this will be my final entry in this competition

Much improved!
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Much better. Would like to see more light on tree. Not tree lights.
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WOW !!
   That's almost real!
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thank you guys!

i knew someone would notice my laziness on that present paper material...i actually used a metallic car paint material on this because i wanted to finish the render

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I think it could be easy fixed with some postprocess work. I usually give it some roughness(if your program allows it) if I can't reduce the IOR(reflectivity).
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Great new image Carloh. Just not massively keen on the tree lights having such a wide flare, perhaps it's just my personal taste, but the eye is instantly drawn towards them. The lamp looks a million times better. Nice work it's almost a photo.
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Good work Carloh, especially the improvements on the shade. It has the cold/warm and dark/light balance needed in a render.
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hey guys,
the voting for the competition is now open...if you like you can support me by clicking "like" on this facebook image https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=623453751047580%26amp;set=a.623453681047587.1073741965.112084092184551%26amp;type=3%26amp;theater

thank you all in advance and have a merry christmas!

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Very good work. I like it a lot!
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DankeschΓΆn Jochen und GrΓΌΓe ΓΌber den Rhein!

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GrΓΌΓe zurΓΌck nach Monnem!
(Greetings back to Mannheim)
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