Glasshouse with pool
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This is my first model I did in SketchUp and first experience with rendering as well. FOr rendering I used SU Podium. Still n00b, but I like it. Hope I will improve
Any comments and advices are more than welcome
Thank you in advance.P.S. Sorry for my trashy english. Im not native speaker
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Hi, Very good for a start !!
Your images are a bit dark, the water material need to be improved, the floor calpinage too.
Keep going...
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@fymoro said:
Hi, Very good for a start !!
Your images are a bit dark, the water material need to be improved, the floor calpinage too.
Keep going...Yes they are dark. I used darker settings for shadows in SU because SU Podium did some shiny spots there before. I need to play with settings more. How should I improve floor. Bump it little bit ? Thank you mate for comment and advice
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Hey, good looking render, Just a couple of improvements and it will be looking great! I would add a couple of interior lights, maybe above the couches and in the pool. To make the floor look better, I would add a trim around the pool, even just the SU tile textures, and then a different tile inside the pool, and add a bumpmap to the water, This will add a huge amount of realism. looking great!
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Nice! I would drop the POV down, but that's just me.
But overall, I find the pic very inviting and wished I was there.
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@unknownuser said:
Nice! I would drop the POV down, but that's just me.
But overall, I find the pic very inviting and wished I was there.
Thank you for comment ecofeco
Sorry for my stupid question but what is POV ? Exuse me but Im realy new in this 
Edit: POV Point of view ?
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Hello guys
So I tryed to improve water, floor mosaic and I added some more light to picture. I used simple sky picture as backgroud as well. So here is result.
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@will03 said:
Hey, good looking render, Just a couple of improvements and it will be looking great! I would add a couple of interior lights, maybe above the couches and in the pool. To make the floor look better, I would add a trim around the pool, even just the SU tile textures, and then a different tile inside the pool, and add a bumpmap to the water, This will add a huge amount of realism. looking great!
Oh Will I didnt see you reply
Great advices. I did almost all, but didnt add trim and didnt change tiles in pool yet. But you are definitely right Thank you guys -
that's a great improvement, FilipAGuy. even a bit lighter would be even better. oh and maybe try to host your pictures somewhere that doens't have ads... you can even simply upload them as an attachment to your post!
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@filipaguy said:
@unknownuser said:
Nice! I would drop the POV down, but that's just me.
But overall, I find the pic very inviting and wished I was there.
Thank you for comment ecofeco
Sorry for my stupid question but what is POV ? Exuse me but Im realy new in this Edit: POV Point of view ?
You got it.
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