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    • F Offline
      flipya
      last edited by flipya

      Hi all,

      these are the first renders I post here.

      Please give me the harshest critiques you can dish out! (but click twice to view full please)
      The material for the facades of the expansion of this appartment is very similar to this.

      Rendered in Twilight, postpro Photoshop ofc


      The view the neighbours will get


      The view from streetlevel

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      • soloS Offline
        solo
        last edited by

        Philip, these look great, I am a little confused as to what is image and what is model (a good thing).
        Can you post some wire images so I can understand?

        Second image, first building, 4th level glass reflection a little give away.

        http://www.solos-art.com

        If you see a toilet in your dreams do not use it.

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          D-space
          last edited by

          It's pretty tough to make much rendering comments esp on photomatch. I mean a small fraction is rendered (I guess) and most parts are photos.
          Definetly the humans from the warehouse are pretty obvious. πŸ˜„

          http://blibestmentalt.no/54981

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            flipya
            last edited by

            Thanks Solo, wireframe won't really show it so I'll post the original photos.

            D-space, I see what you mean. Please C&C on the 100% crops below πŸ˜„ About the I-clone people, sometimes I prefer them over postpro or rendered PR cutouts, even though they lack realism. Matter of personal taste I suppose...

            The reason the images show this much surrounding buildings is that the aim of the images was to convey the architect's feeling that the addition would fit into the roofscape. You know, committees and all...


            Original image


            Other original image


            100% crop


            Other 100%

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              Cyberdactyl
              last edited by

              Nice integration Flipya.

              I have a couple of questions.

              The texture inside the upper window suggests there's a brick wall inside?

              Also, the roof looks like a ballasted membrane, is that correct?

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              • olisheaO Offline
                olishea
                last edited by

                flipya have you considered a cheeky night render? light would look awesome coming through the polycarb...and you can make the original photos 'look' like its night time. just a thought πŸ˜„

                oli

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                  flipya
                  last edited by

                  Wew, thought this topic was gonna die quietly πŸ˜„

                  @unknownuser said:

                  The texture inside the upper window suggests there's a brick wall inside?
                  Also, the roof looks like a ballasted membrane, is that correct?

                  That 'texture' is actually a reflection of the building (out of frame) behind camera-left. Noticed that modelling the surroundings really helped make the Polycarbonate come to life so that's what I did. Reflections suck though, your remark proves that πŸ˜„ . Should've just taken pictures of the surrounding buildings and mapped them to simple boxes. Lesson learned. About the roof; I have no clue what a ballasted membrane is (I studied architecture in Dutch and never finished it), but client didn't give me accurate specs on roof so I came up with this. πŸ˜†
                  Thanks for your comments on integration, though that was the easiest part 😳

                  @unknownuser said:

                  a cheeky night render

                  I know I know! I tried to ease my client into that, but no luck 😞 Would look cool, and I'm probably gonna have a little gap in jobs in about 3 weeks. I'm definitely gonna give it a go then! Not photoshopping the image though, close enough to just take a nighttime picture πŸ˜„

                  And a P.S. of course: Sad thing is that in terms of realism I like the second one (view from below) the best, while it represents just 1/6th of the time 😞

                  Music signature: great song by Rox

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                  • olisheaO Offline
                    olishea
                    last edited by

                    @unknownuser said:

                    close enough to just take a nighttime picture πŸ˜„

                    great! looking forward to it. i love this material, it comes alive at night. great work flipya

                    oli

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                      pyroluna
                      last edited by

                      Hey I'm looking at your picture again...
                      and suddenly I wonder:
                      How did that lady get there? Where is the door? There's no door leading to the roof terrace!

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                        matteo
                        last edited by

                        @unknownuser said:

                        Hey I'm looking at your picture again...
                        and suddenly I wonder:
                        How did that lady get there? Where is the door? There's no door leading to the roof terrace!

                        Teleportation πŸ˜†
                        And you haven't seen anything yet: the toilet resides on a desert exotic island! πŸ€“

                        Ok, the last was a tribute to Dan Simmons' Hyperion novel.

                        On a serious way, flipya: that's a great rendering/photo montage! It might be not ultra-real, but it gives the exact sense of what the new addition will be.

                        hire me: http://www.nonsolo3d.it/ !

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                          flipya
                          last edited by

                          @unknownuser said:

                          How did that lady get there?

                          Java_plan_crop.JPG

                          The (future) roof-terrace belongs to the neighbours πŸ˜„

                          @Matteo; haven't read any books by Dan Simmons, but it sounds intriguing πŸ˜†
                          Thanks for your comment on the images. Conveying the general idea of the structure was exactly what we set out to do, and judging by your response we succeeded πŸ˜„

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                            Daniel
                            last edited by

                            Beautiful design/renderings, Philip. Looking at the glass railing in front of your female friend, though, it appears it too low for a guard rail. Or, do you WANT people to tumble over it?

                            My avatar is an anachronism.

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                              Cyberdactyl
                              last edited by

                              @flipya said:

                              About the roof; I have no clue what a ballasted membrane is

                              Commercial flat roofs consist of roughly three general types. There are more, but the below are the most common.

                              -A Bitumen "build-up" (if you've ever seen the Shawshank Redemption, that's what they are doing in the roof scene) It's basically a mopped asphaltic substance with layers of felt paper, sometimes with fine gravel for UV protection.

                              -An exposed membrane of some sort, EPDM (like intertube rubber), Thermoplastic or PVC that's mechanically fastened or glued.

                              -Ballasted membrane of EPDM, TPO or PVC. Ballasted simply means putting river rock on top of a membrane to "anchor" or hold it down.

                              For example, the roof in your picture that you are setting your translucent addition on is ballasted or a loose laid membrane with rock weighing it down.

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                                flipya
                                last edited by

                                Thanks Cyberdactil, I guess in that case it is indeed a ballasted membrane.

                                Gonna study this info from you, as my clientbase is expanding to include more international clients it's a good thing to know the english words πŸ˜„

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