Interior scene (Vfsu Mac) Update 12/01/10

rickgraham

@foxar said:

Here's he first final image! (other were somewhat pre-final)

Cheers!

Nice, but let me crit a little.

I agree with other posters about the brown grass, rug. I'd hate to see what kind of vacuum needed for that!
The wall that the bed is on - it appears like it doesn't go all the way up (there is a gap between that room and the adjacent room), or is it an optical illusion?
Having an HVAC background, I see no HVAC - I guess the window open is the HVAC? Just kidding on this one.

What renderer and how long did it take to produce the render?

Rick

KXI System

Keep it up!

dacad

I'm liking this, but what is putting things of to me is te leather at the sofas. It really doesn't look like real leather and you probably need a litle more detail on this one. Other thing the edges in the sofas look to sharp.

Hope you don't mind the critic:)

FoXar

@ olishea and michaliszissiou, thanks for the comments! I'll see what I can do with the noise, btw, should it best be chromatic (black and white) or normal noise? I haven't tried
this before. (It's my first commercial project in Vray, previously I used Kerkythea's unbiased methods, which really didn't require adding extra noise )
The carpet I'll keep it as is, I wanted to have a hairy carpet, it's looking somewhat sharp.. but okay..

@ Rick, Yes.. now you say so.. seems like I forgot to fill the gap Mind the gap!
Oh yes there is a HVAC, it's incorporated in the curtain which improves the airflow a lot!
Made in Vray beta for Mac in about 3 hours (I made my settings much higher then needed I think.. xD )

@ KXI System, thank you! This is apreciated

@ DacaD, Your critics are welcome to me as long as you keep them formal instead of blaming hehe, good point
on the leather though, I've been trying a lot, until now this was unfortunately the best I could get but I'll tweak
it some more!

michaliszissiou

Uniform monochromatic should be fine. Is there any dithering option in vray? Or use a texture for walls not just a plain colour.

FoXar

@michaliszissiou said:

Uniform monochromatic should be fine. Is there any dithering option in vray? Or use a texture for walls not just a plain colour.

Thank you, I don't know anything about it although maybe a very subtle/soft bump on the walls would be good? They do have a noise option in the material editor

michaliszissiou

"They do have a noise option in the material editor"
Try it, sounds interesting. Monochromatic noise in photoshop.

arail1

You're getting a beautiful light in these, especially the one with the red bedspread. Very warm and clear and inviting. Very impressive.

FoXar

Hello folks! Thanks for all the comments that have been given so far, it's really appreciated!
Here are all the final images

CHILLI

ow daym that looks really awesome you're good!

or is it just the render faking it? like the cake

sepo

To lose banding I would save image as 16 bits (at least). Add small amount of noise and than do postprocess. That should sort it out.