[WIP] house - C&C

[dermotcoll]

not a fan of the mirror on the island showback - understand why you would use it though.

Don't like the colour of the worktop - would be better using a colour similar to your cabinet doors in a kitchen style like that.

All the other aspects of the render are spot on in my very "un-render-educated" opinion. I would be very pleased if I could produce something half as good as that.

[d12dozr]

Looks pretty good, although I would expect more lights in the ceiling, and maybe not as shiny a ceiling.

[dermotcoll]

Just spotted another wee error on the model - the extractor hood is way too low to be practical - need at least 600mm between the top of the cooking surface and the bottom of the extractor to give a workable height for moving pots & pans easily. Sorry to criticise

[honoluludesktop]

You left your rangetop on. Could burn the house down:-)

[21D]

first of all, thank you all for your C&C

@dermotcoll said:

Don't like the colour of the worktop - would be better using a colour similar to your cabinet doors in a kitchen style like that.

wouldn't it make the area to WHITE?
I really do apreciate your advice, because this might be the house that i end up building to live in, so any advice does help.

@d12dozr said:

Looks pretty good, although I would expect more lights in the ceiling, and maybe not as shiny a ceiling.

I'm going for an indirect illumination, this is why i have the reflective ceiling
I'll post later on some images of the window/doors so you can see that even without turning on the light it's still going to have enough light coming through.

@dermotcoll said:

Just spotted another wee error on the model - the extractor hood is way too low to be practical - need at least 600mm between the top of the cooking surface and the bottom of the extractor to give a workable height for moving pots & pans easily. Sorry to criticise

actually it is exactly 650mm
maytbe because of the angle of the shot it looks a bit narrow,
but there's quite enough space.
I sat down with my "Neufert's Architects' Data"book when i was drawing up this house

@honoluludesktop said:

You left your rangetop on. Could burn the house down:-)

oooops let me go turn it off hahaha

[21D]

a small update....
in the second image you can see that the windows are big enough to let a lot of natural light come trough....

[FoXar]

Hmm looking nice, as a point of view from an interior architecture student I would add some more color as the following;

-It looks like you like the color red, white and red are a good combination you've made IMO but I would make the color
come back on some spots, like on some walls, here an example of which walls I would make red (btw, if you plan to use it don't
use plain red, but a somewhat deeper red which will create a nice mood with your indirect illumination.

-Also you could try to use a warmer coloured wood, don't get me wrong by saying warmer more 'red', but a darker
wood with more brown in it.

Hope this might help you and you like it, of course this is just based on what I would prefer to have and some knowledge from school..

Cheers,
FoXy ^^

[21D]

@foxar said:

Hmm looking nice, as a point of view from an interior architecture student I would add some more color as the following;

-It looks like you like the color red, white and red are a good combination you've made IMO but I would make the color
come back on some spots, like on some walls, here an example of which walls I would make red (btw, if you plan to use it don't
use plain red, but a somewhat deeper red which will create a nice mood with your indirect illumination.

-Also you could try to use a warmer coloured wood, don't get me wrong by saying warmer more 'red', but a darker
wood with more brown in it.

Hope this might help you and you like it, of course this is just based on what I would prefer to have and some knowledge from school..

Cheers,
FoXy ^^

Yes it does help, because i did kind of feel like it was getting a little too white, if you know what i mean, i do appreciate your input and insight, i really love your ideas, and will be implementing them pretty soon. the wall will be no problem, but I'll have to find a good texture for the floor material, because right now i have non hahahaha, but I'll try to find something that fits your description, so i can implement it in,
and again thank you for you help.

[FoXar]

Great to hear these were helpful, yes you were right, it was getting to white, if I may suggest an other thing, I get why you're making a mirror in the island, it
'creates' more space, but I really wouldn't do that tough, if you still want to create a somewhat larger looking space I recommend you to make it anodized aluminum (doesn't scratch too easy) with an indirect illumination that comes from the countertop down to the ground, you get what I mean?

And not to forget, here you have the wood texture (I took this from the maxwell material library: http://resources.maxwellrender.com/ and credits go to paxreld.

Cheers,
Mr. Fox ^^

[21D]

A little update on my Project
your C&C again are welcomed,
oh and thnx again to everyone for there help and advice,
hope you like the final outcome

on the left is the original v-ray output and on the right, a PostPro image

on the left is the original v-ray output and on the right, a PostPro image

on the left is the original v-ray output and on the right, a PostPro image

on the left is the original v-ray output and on the right, a PostPro image

on the left is the original v-ray output and on the right, a PostPro image

Sorry i was not able to uplad the images directly to SketchUcation...

[21D]

Hi again guys,
another update here,
i used VUE to render the exterior of the house
and photoshop to PP the render

hope you guys like it, and every comment and crit is very welcomed

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