Buildings
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Hi guys, i'm new to the forum and now i'm just starting my career in the forum(haha...), so i said i'd post some renders of my works.
Oh, i wanted to ask you, are they looking good for a presentation to a respective client?
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Dear Mr. Fan, unless your building is in the middle of Kansas, without any road access to it, I'd tighten the shot on the building more so one can see more detail on it, and less of the empty context. Nice sky, but it looks overcast and clients usually want to see their buildings in a sunny, happy setting.
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I would agree with Daniel. Also, the building looks very flat (like you pasted the images of the building on an extruded rectangle). I would zoom in closer, and make sure it is not a flat building, especially if you are presenting it to clients! Good luck.
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Getting closer but it still needs work. I would first try and find an eye level that makes sense, either physical eye level (maybe 5'6") or birds eye, or pick a surrounding building to be "looking out the window in". Speaking of surrounding buildings where are they? You need to add the site surroundings in so it doesn’t make it look like its out in the middle of nowhere. Add some people walking around and cars driving and stopped at stoplights and I think you will be well on your way.
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I see what you mean, you are absolutely right.
Is this better?
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