OFFICE RENDER FOR C & C

[EDMON242004]

Here is a render I am currently working on, SU+Vray+PS. Comments and suggestions would be highly appreciated

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[HFM]

I think it's a pretty good render, but I would add a little more detail in the windows to give it a boost

[honoluludesktop]

Kudos, not bad at all. Don't know myself how to do it on a computer, but in pencil I would give the left facing side of the building a darker value, shade the main building face diagonally from upper left to lower right light to darker in shade, darken the foreground, and add more sky above, shading from top to bottom, darker to lighter. The extra sky would allow adding a branch framing the top of the render (like those Architectural photos). Maybe bump the walls a little. Darken the shadows. But this is only refinement, I like what you did with the basics.

[putnik]

Looks a little too white.. Shouldn't this be in the Gallery section?

[Daniel]

Very nice, Edmon. You might want to tone down the grass (looks too yellow), and maybe add a figure or two.

[EDMON242004]

Hello everybody, thank you for the suggestions, I made some adjustments, this is version 2, again C & C are most welcome.,,,

[mdlok]

Cool Koolhaas reflection.......
So this office is located in China?

mdlok

[EDMON242004]

Thanks, well not really, just use the image as reflection, I am still working on the rendering and post processing....

[Sir]

heh yeh id be careful using such a recognisable building as a reflection, it loactes your building for you...in compleatly the wronge place!

also, does the glass deliberatly have a green tint? it looks a bit strange

also, maybe take the render view pointing at the other corner of the building, rather than the one your on. the corner closest goes out as the building gets up, but at first its not that obvious and looks like a perspective error...

is there a particular reason for showing that side? maybe you should show the main entrance

[EDMON242004]

Yes the glass is shaded green, and the corner actually is really slants outward(not straight) as the building goes up,, I will post other views of this building when done, by the way this is the rear view facing a small river, I will post the front when finished, Ok I think I have to change the reflection I might get sued by the architect....?

[Sir]

it might be nice to see the river, if you modelled it/have a pic... more reference around the building would be good too, cityscape maybe?