New Architectural Illustration
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Heres my most recent. Hope you guys like it and any feedback/critiques are greatly appreciated.
-steelers05
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That is great work. I am impressed!
Just a few notes if I may:
The man in the lower right of the image is standing close enough to the glass I would think you would see his reflection. I usually like seeing trees "bleeding in" on the sides but you viewpoint being as high as it is I don't think it is working. And to me, the airplane is distracting but the birds work great.But these are all minor points. Great work.
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Its not bad however its too saturated for my taste. I recommend considering the following:
- Sort the reflection. It looks fake and done in post pro and should be darker and less reflective with perhaps a slight bump to it if you are wanting to suggest atmospheric pressure on the panes.
- The terracotta material could do with a bit of detail. Perhaps its just due to the image size but some detail or colour variation would help.
- Finally it would really help if you could dirty up the textures a little as they are all too clean and it ends up looking to CG (which it obviously is). I'm not sure if you can but running and ambient occlusion pass would add detail and help give the building a more realistic look to it
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Nice integration- yes, dirty up the materials slightly
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You sign in as Steelers 05 and the plant density is like Pittsburgh in the summer. Where is this building located?
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Thanks for the feedback guys. I Wish i was able to model more of the surroundings to get more reflections, but we were only able to do what you see in the image and that limited the reflections. I will try to work on them in PS to see if I can make them more convincing. And the materials are a little clean, especially the terra cotta and I will see what I can do with that one (Gotta ask the architect
)The building is actually right down the street from my office in an area called the "Strip District". It is right outside of the city of Pittsburgh...a two minute walk to get into the city from there.
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I was right about location, where did you go to school?
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Just graduated from La Roche College with a Degree in Interior Design
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