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    tiriki
    last edited by 1 Apr 2009, 07:17

    Hi everyone πŸ˜„

    I'm using Podium to render my scenes in Sketchup... I hope you like them... but note that are my first renders, I have so many things to learn.... any comment and help is welcome πŸ‘


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      Daniel
      last edited by 1 Apr 2009, 13:12

      Great start. My one comment would be that they are dark, especially the second one. You might want to play around with your shadow settings to try to get more sun light cast on the lower cabinets. Also, when your gonna use your model for rendering, be careful with your curved surfaces - make sure there are enough segments that it will appear smooth. For instance, the light fixture in the second image appears faceted.

      My avatar is an anachronism.

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        tiriki
        last edited by 1 Apr 2009, 21:37

        Hi Daniel!

        Thank's so much for your comments, I'm happy to receive a feedback, I need some suggestions and I have nobody near that can help me πŸ˜‰
        I'm working to improve light in my model... I'll post my results πŸ‘

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          mitcorb
          last edited by 1 Apr 2009, 22:03

          tiriki:
          I have done exactly zero rendering, so, for what it is worth: in the bedroom scene, I think I am seeing the light cast on the wall as a segmental curve rather than a smooth curve from the table lamp. This may be related to what Daniel mentioned. Aside from that- nice scenes, colors and renders.

          I take the slow, deliberate approach in my aimless wandering.

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            tiriki
            last edited by 1 Apr 2009, 22:15

            Thank's mitcorb πŸ˜‰
            I'm happy you like the scenes and the colors!
            I'm trying to improve the details and the segmental curve is one of these πŸ‘

            It's a little bit difficult for me to write here, I'm italian... so sorry for my english... I hope that staying here will help me to learn sketchup and english too πŸ˜‰

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              mitcorb
              last edited by 2 Apr 2009, 15:37

              I am of Italian descent, and shamefully, I do not speak the language. I did study Latin in school, which gives me some insight into written Italian.
              I didn't have any trouble understanding your post and neither did Daniel.
              I admire your talents. Keep up the good work.
              Sincerely,
              mitcorb

              I take the slow, deliberate approach in my aimless wandering.

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                pbacot
                last edited by 2 Apr 2009, 16:44

                Good work!

                On the first image window image of the mountain. The angle of the camera shot gives the feel that the room is tilted upward. Here the mountain looks to be lower than the floor plane.

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                  tiriki
                  last edited by 2 Apr 2009, 21:05

                  @mitcorb said:

                  I am of Italian descent, and shamefully, I do not speak the language. I did study Latin in school, which gives me some insight into written Italian.
                  I didn't have any trouble understanding your post and neither did Daniel.
                  I admire your talents. Keep up the good work.
                  Sincerely,
                  mitcorb

                  Thank you mitcorb! I'm happy that I'm able to make me understand πŸ˜‰
                  I understand english but I don't speek it very well... I'm sure that with some practice I'll obtain good results πŸ‘

                  I'm workin at the models, so I can show you my improvements... I hope that there will be some to show πŸ˜„

                  tiriki

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                    tiriki
                    last edited by 2 Apr 2009, 21:10

                    @pbacot said:

                    Good work!

                    On the first image window image of the mountain. The angle of the camera shot gives the feel that the room is tilted upward. Here the mountain looks to be lower than the floor plane.

                    Hi Pbacot!
                    Thank's for your advice... I didn't think at the background when I positioned the camera πŸ˜’

                    I'll fix this up in my new render πŸ‘

                    tiriki

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