My first renders

tiriki

Hi everyone

I'm using Podium to render my scenes in Sketchup... I hope you like them... but note that are my first renders, I have so many things to learn.... any comment and help is welcome

Daniel

Great start. My one comment would be that they are dark, especially the second one. You might want to play around with your shadow settings to try to get more sun light cast on the lower cabinets. Also, when your gonna use your model for rendering, be careful with your curved surfaces - make sure there are enough segments that it will appear smooth. For instance, the light fixture in the second image appears faceted.

tiriki

Hi Daniel!

Thank's so much for your comments, I'm happy to receive a feedback, I need some suggestions and I have nobody near that can help me
I'm working to improve light in my model... I'll post my results

mitcorb

tiriki:
I have done exactly zero rendering, so, for what it is worth: in the bedroom scene, I think I am seeing the light cast on the wall as a segmental curve rather than a smooth curve from the table lamp. This may be related to what Daniel mentioned. Aside from that- nice scenes, colors and renders.

tiriki

Thank's mitcorb
I'm happy you like the scenes and the colors!
I'm trying to improve the details and the segmental curve is one of these

It's a little bit difficult for me to write here, I'm italian... so sorry for my english... I hope that staying here will help me to learn sketchup and english too

mitcorb

I am of Italian descent, and shamefully, I do not speak the language. I did study Latin in school, which gives me some insight into written Italian.
I didn't have any trouble understanding your post and neither did Daniel.
I admire your talents. Keep up the good work.
Sincerely,
mitcorb

pbacot

Good work!

On the first image window image of the mountain. The angle of the camera shot gives the feel that the room is tilted upward. Here the mountain looks to be lower than the floor plane.

tiriki

@mitcorb said:

I am of Italian descent, and shamefully, I do not speak the language. I did study Latin in school, which gives me some insight into written Italian.
I didn't have any trouble understanding your post and neither did Daniel.
I admire your talents. Keep up the good work.
Sincerely,
mitcorb

Thank you mitcorb! I'm happy that I'm able to make me understand
I understand english but I don't speek it very well... I'm sure that with some practice I'll obtain good results

I'm workin at the models, so I can show you my improvements... I hope that there will be some to show

tiriki

tiriki

@pbacot said:

Good work!

On the first image window image of the mountain. The angle of the camera shot gives the feel that the room is tilted upward. Here the mountain looks to be lower than the floor plane.

Hi Pbacot!
Thank's for your advice... I didn't think at the background when I positioned the camera

I'll fix this up in my new render

tiriki