Concert Venue (Maxwell)
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converted old building in philly.... yes, not happy with the people either
8 hour maxwell render.. a few linework layers + people on top..have to change up a few materials per client request..
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Very nice Jason! You should lighten up the line work a little bit. It is a bit over powering and distracting at the moment... would you mind showing the render without the lines?
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I like it a lot Jason. You always do great work. I love the green furniture on the left and the nice orange glow on the right. You have created a "mood" for sure.
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I also like it a lot, Jason...
If I should suggest something it would be to add some stage lights...
(I've attached an example just to let you see what I mean...)
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Jason,
Nice render and mood. There is some noticeable tiling in the floor and the lights seem a bit busy (linework would fix it) other than that I like it. I do not even mind the people if they were a bit lighter or more transparent.
Scott
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appreciate the comments, guys...and i'll definitely incorporate all of them... frederik, good call on the stage lights.... let me see if i can incorporate this... the 'idea' was that this was a bit before the show was starting.. so i'm not sure how many stage lights would be on... i'll add a couple in and pshop the beams...
here's the updated raw render... changed the floor material..which is still tiling...but maybe wont be as noticeable with people?
and here is a quick image with just a couple layers of linework..and no people (yet)
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Jason,
Much better. The floor is not as noticeable now (not tiling as bad). Overall you have set a nice mood in the image. Almost get the feeling of just before the show. The camera angle is spot on!
Scott
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@marked001 said:
frederik, good call on the stage lights.... let me see if i can incorporate this... the 'idea' was that this was a bit before the show was starting.. so i'm not sure how many stage lights would be on... i'll add a couple in and pshop the beams...
Perhaps the image I posted was a bit exaggerated...
I'd say that one or two spots with ray-beams (if that's what they're called...) either pointing towards the stage or away from it, would make it...
IMO you can't really see that this is a concert venue... It might just be a hall of some kind...
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Frederik, great suggestion. I agree the lights would be nice, especially if you give them that softer look like the sample.
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come on...there's a drumset and some amps! thats got to give it away
here is an update with white painted brick... the other brick was really cool...buuut, since this is for a zoning hearing, the architect doesnt want it to look 'too' raw even though it probalby really will be... and trying some more realistic people, what do you think about them? (yes, some odd placements....threw them in too quickly)
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