Pool house (First post in a long time)
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heres another
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I really like the rendering and the scene setup as well. Nice work.
The only thing that jumps out at me is how evenly repetitive the fence is.
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thanks! yea that was bugging me too, but i really like that texture, i have no idea how to fix it and cant find any other good textures.
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Nice work. To me there is a general gray overtone to the render that makes it look cold and winter like. I would try and blue up the water and sky a little and maybe add some more "beachy" things. The pool and house seem a little disconnected from their surroundings.
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thanks, is this any better?
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Hey, now it's snowing! LOL What are you using to render?
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HAHA it actually is snowing where i am! we beat a record, apparently we havent had this much since 64. I am using the newest version of podium.
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I think the images are actually well done, I like the semi-washed out appearance. But that's just me. One small architecture critique, your mullions have no reason to be that large on such a small structure. You could easily have none at that span. If you like them aesthetically of course then never-mind, but their size I believe distracts more than it enhances. Nice work.
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hehe forgive me, im only 15 but i have no idea what mullions are... thanks for the comment!
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@trialskid said:
hehe forgive me, im only 15 but i have no idea what mullions are... thanks for the comment!
That's perfectly alright. Its simply a fancy word for the black bars of material (metal?) separating your window panes. Structurally speaking you could make that entire wall a single pane of glass, with no need for those dividers. In any case they could be thinner. Their thickness as it stands now overly segments the facade, at least I feel that way. Overall I do like the work however, its just me being nitpicky. Do you plan on pursuing architecture? This is strong work for 15 with no formal training,
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