Just practicing (WIP renders)

allanx · 17 Jun 2008, 13:19

Hi to all,

I've been doing some Sketchup renders for a couple of weeks now and I'm afraid I might loose my knowledge in Photoreal renderings, so I render an old scene and added some new objects and here it is....

Model are all SU, trees are Onyx and rendered in Maxwell....

Hope you all like it..

allanx

Camera 3: http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/1395/camera3bloom1200copyrz7.jpg
Camera 2: http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/3286/camera2bloom1200copyji0.jpg

tomsdesk · 17 Jun 2008, 13:45

Very nice, Allan, very nice indeed!

ScottPara · 17 Jun 2008, 14:00

Alan,

Those are great. My only comment would be that is alot of green. Maybe make the mortar joints show as a concrete color to add some more depth. With all the green it seems to flatten the image. Also maybe add some more splash of color in the plantings. Other than that the lighting is very good.

Scott

mateo soletic · 17 Jun 2008, 14:06

Nice work Allan.

solo · 17 Jun 2008, 14:21

I actually like it a lot, has a solid feel. The bicycle in one of the images is a great touch.

boofredlay · 17 Jun 2008, 16:08

Very nice indeed. The first shot is great.

Is it a flat roof or will there eventually be gutters and downspouts?

Stinkie · 17 Jun 2008, 16:43

Yeah ... looks a little 'flat'. Camera angle ain't good either. Good start, though. This could turn out real nice.

marked001 · 17 Jun 2008, 17:25

landscaping looks great... building looks kind of 'flat' though? like all diffuse materials or something? or the lighting is coming from behind maybe?

allanx · 18 Jun 2008, 00:24

Thank you all guys for the compliments and suggestions, I know comments coming from you guys are all for the best.

These renders are test and from the looks of it will continue as a personal project, there are some issues with materials and flatness of the scene which I am working on at the moment.

Thank you and I will post some new images as soonest.

allanx

rcossoli · 18 Jun 2008, 01:12

very good the two images, especially the first where the sky became very well and there is less noise in the second, but equally this is only a matter of time rendering, good job!!!

allanx · 19 Jun 2008, 11:48

Here's an updated image of one of my renders...

Camera 3: http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/1395/camera3bloom1200copyrz7.jpg

Thanks,

allanx

allanx · 21 Jun 2008, 04:22

Here's another shot from the same render...

Camera 2: http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/3286/camera2bloom1200copyji0.jpg