Concept Bike
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Really nice model.
couple of crits: lighten up the background a bit and make the chrome bits a little less shiny. Kind of feels like the rest of the scene is being overwhelmed by these 2 things, still its a very good render.
Edit: just saw those 2 new ones, kind of makes most of my post really piintless, apart form "really nice render"
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i hate myself because i don t know to render
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Thank you for your comments, still a WIP I'll fine tune this bike although I'm still learning my way around KT... I have a long way to go yet.
Here are a few closeup detailed shots.
In this pic I integrated the "Stop" and "Park/Signal" lights right in to the tailpipes......smooth ahhh!!!
danny
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this is awesome..love the swing arms..really cool..
renderings are definitely getting brighter as you go..how about a gloss or diffuse white studio background so we can see all these great details you've got in there?
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I'm working on that right now, as you can see I'm still getting a grip of rendering but I think I'll get there with some help from you good people.
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I think that is a little better, you can see more details now.
Click on image to enlarge.
I'm no motorcycle engineer this is just what came out of my imagination so if you see a few design boo boos I did it cause it either looked good or I'm still working on it.
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Great work Danny, well done.
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Wow Danny, that was fun to view. Great work and well done.
BTW when ou have it built be sure to only go straight with
no turnsMike
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great job!
american chopper should build one of that -
Wow.
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hey would you mind showing us how you started your bike? I've been trying to make a motorcycle but i need help he he
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Danny,
You must have known how to draw bikes before su, every pcs looks good and in place. Did you model all the pieces. Nice model and nice rendering as well.
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hey, my only sugestion is that the bottom of the (really nice) bike seems a little too flat. this is especialy apparent in the last render. try adding some swoop-y lines too go with the windscreen and rest of the bike.
i like all the little details (i call the "greebles") on the dash board displays and on the swing arms. i love the idea of hollow wheels, it gives such a clean and modern look. great job!!!*edit: i just realized i looks startlingly like a dodge motorcycle concept from a couple years back. it was powered by a v-10 engien from the dodge viper, and had a body style similar to yours. im not saying thats a bad thing, its really a good thing.
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Hi everyone and thanks for all the positive comments. I'm sorry for being MIA for a while but I have a medical emergency with my dad and I'm out of the country right now and can't access my files.
@RayOchoa, No problem my friend, I just have to get back home to do it. Updates soon
@igor, since my last update I have redone the bikes body design and tweaked a few things and it looks a lot cleaner now. I have taken some of your and others suggestions, so thanks. When I get back home I'll post the updated bike.
@lapx, Yes, I created all the components. This is my first bike ever in SU...I guess I just have an eye for it.
Danny
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yeah, great eye can't wait
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Absolutely FANTASTIC! I love it!! ...when can I get a ride!?
Great work! Thanks for sharing and keep it up!
Cheers,
- CraigD
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