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    • tinanneT Offline
      tinanne
      last edited by

      Great job Jason, as usual.

      PS, I'm still waiting for my Christmas card? Did your bundle of joy arrive yet?

      Executive Director : American Society of Architectural Illustrators
      AIP 30 Competition opens soon. ASAI.org

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      • jenujacobJ Offline
        jenujacob
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        if i rem correctly the "bundle of joy" would arrive on the 17th of jan! πŸ˜‰
        i specifically rem it coz its my sisters Bday that day! πŸ˜„

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        • marked001M Offline
          marked001
          last edited by

          you are absolutely correct, jenu! only a few days left..i will start freaking out very soon..

          tina..you never gave me an address! haha... πŸ˜‰

          thanks pmiller... i definitely agree.. these are fantasy anyway... this is really to show the kitchen cabinets.. but...those stairs do exist πŸ˜‰

          http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/6838/coconut09tt6.jpg

          the 'final' (i hope) is cooking now.. i've had to start and restart it a bunch of times between yesterday and today and make some changes... so hopefully this is it.. hopefully it clears up in under 20 hours πŸ˜• lol..

          http://www.revision21vis.com

          instagram: revi21on

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          • tinanneT Offline
            tinanne
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            @marked001 said:

            tina..you never gave me an address! haha... πŸ˜‰

            😳 sent you a PM

            Executive Director : American Society of Architectural Illustrators
            AIP 30 Competition opens soon. ASAI.org

            Architectural Rendering

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            • marked001M Offline
              marked001
              last edited by

              here's an update.. kind of considering this the 'final' b/c i dont really have any more time to play with it.. let me know what you think..

              http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/604/lagoonloftskitchen01140cv8.jpg

              http://www.revision21vis.com

              instagram: revi21on

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              • FrederikF Offline
                Frederik
                last edited by

                Hhhmmmm....
                Don't get me wrong on this... It sure looks good, but I have some disturbing things, which makes this render look a bit too poor... 😳

                I.e. the brushed steel on the cooker hood seem out of scale...
                The wooden texture on the stairs don't look right... (Is it same material you've used on the door?)
                The lightning of the room/scene don't seem right - at least not to me...?!? 😐

                But apart from this it looks nice... πŸ˜‰
                (Although you can always argue that adding more details to the scene will make it look more realistic... πŸ˜‰ )

                Cheers
                Kim Frederik

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                • marked001M Offline
                  marked001
                  last edited by

                  yeah..i'm not thrilled with the brushed metal scale either..didnt really notice til it was too late to start.. and i did have a hard time with geting the stair textures to look right..

                  the lighting works for me i think, though.. πŸ˜‰ always have a tough time with lighting.. supposed to be whiter light in the foreground from the window.. and warmer light in the kitchen from downlights just above.. maybe some color correction is in order..unfortunatley, it looks different on both my monitors πŸ˜•

                  http://www.revision21vis.com

                  instagram: revi21on

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                  • marked001M Offline
                    marked001
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                    i think this is better...guess i need to calibrate my mac monitor πŸ˜•

                    http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/6861/lagoonloftskitchen01140ua6.jpg

                    http://www.revision21vis.com

                    instagram: revi21on

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                    • S Offline
                      ScottPara
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                      Jason,

                      The image looks good.

                      Some comments:
                      The apples look a bit washed out
                      There needs to be additional lighting as to not rely on rendering the scene with a single (i am guessing) lighting source. This adds to a lack of contrast and the image looking a bit too white. Maybe try lighting the pendants to add some additional contrast and shadows.
                      I too agree that you SU outputs are amazing and capture the feel of the image with no color.

                      Best regards,
                      Scott

                      Love the fact that some HATE my avatar.....

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                      • marked001M Offline
                        marked001
                        last edited by

                        thanks scott.... there actually are a bunch of different light sources πŸ˜• am overall skydome, about 5 downlights (you can see the scallops on the upper left), undercabinet lighting, and the pendants.... lighting is always my big weak point..haha

                        http://www.revision21vis.com

                        instagram: revi21on

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                          marked001
                          last edited by

                          and one more update, with a few minor client-requested updates..

                          http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/5076/lagoonloftskitchen01170om5.jpg

                          http://www.revision21vis.com

                          instagram: revi21on

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