Speaker set

Don Pepz

Hi guys,
Just a couple of speakerset modelled in SU and rendered in Octane.
I used my creative desktop speakers as a reference . Any tips and advice will be great for improvement.

cheers.

mitcorb

I have yet to render anything, but is the depth of field effect in view 3 intentional?
I like it either way. Good attention to detail.
But, what you really need is some of the more experienced folks to give you a grilling.

Richard

Mate it looks like you need to unsoften the last edge on the side of the timber stand before the top curve, this is what is giving you that strange break in the face most noticable in the 3rd image.

I'd also suggest a very fine bump map to be used in the black parts to stop the weird falloff your getting.

Very nice looking speakers by the way!

CoreMaster110

Very cool speakers!!
but the speaker leg looks like its out of positsion/out of balance, it looks like it wants to fall on its back.

Don Pepz

Hi mitcorb,
yes ..the DOF in image 3 was intenional. I would love to render it with my vray for SU but SU keep crashing when caching, and I do not know yet how to add DOF in vray. I tried but without succes.

Richard,
Thank you very much for the tips. I didn't notice that it was the geometry acting weird by that last edge..I thought it was the refelctions . I will try to fix the model let it cook and post again.

Coremaster110,
I agree about the position of the speaker legs. I will try to add more angle for the legs. Thank you very much for your CC.