First night scene Vray (Updated)
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Hi all
Would love you to pick this apart for me. This is my first night scene using Vray.
The job has been handed to the client already. But would like to perfect for my own
portfolio.Design was mine but had heavy restrictions on size/materials/build ability
New image, Still not sure about the sky. Actually think I like the old skey image better.
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like it. nice vibe
...ware did you find the car and plants? I would change the mist-lights on the car.. other than that it looks very nice.
could you tell something about the lights used in the house to aluminate it...?
best,
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Wow, very nice and clear picture. I like the atmosphere.
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great design and render.
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Great work Jonathan, It has a north Texas late afternoon feel to it.
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nice photo
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thats hellawesome! thats awesome
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I'd love to pick it apart... but I can't. My chin hurts from hitting the floor so hard.
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woah. . .
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Wow. Nice render!
holmes1977 can You share camera settings? Focal dist. angle of view etc? -
really nice render... also very nice design!
btw your second link is the same as the first...
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That is amazing, it is a very nice image.
If I had to pick fault, and only because you asked I would say the background image isn't quite late evening enough. It is more noticeable down the right side of the house.
But other than that, nice work!
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@unknownuser said:
like it. nice vibe
...ware did you find the car and plants? I would change the mist-lights on the car.. other than that it looks very nice.
could you tell something about the lights used in the house to aluminate it...?
best,
Hi ya mate
The car comes from the warehouse here's the link
http://sketchup.google.com/3dwarehouse/details?mid=36d0591781587d9fb1bb46d2556ba67d&prevstart=0
The plants are Solos Garden collection heres the link
http://solosplace.com/3Dgarden.aspx
Well worth the small amount of money. I use it in all my exterior renders. Thanks PETEThe Lighting on the inside are omni lights. Set to 18000 Scalar, Colour is R255 G225 B172, I don't think they are quite the right colour, but might be a good base to start with.
I'd like to model the fog lights on the car, but ran out of time. I should do that for future projects.
To everyone else
Thanks for all your compliments, always mean alot. -
@aidus said:
Wow. Nice render!
holmes1977 can You share camera settings? Focal dist. angle of view etc?Hi Aidus
In SU my FOV = 35%
In Vray Camera settings
Shutter Speed + 125
F number = 11
Film speed = 125All the rest is standard.
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holmes, loving your scene. You have really captured a nice environment in the lighting and such. The one thing that stands out to me too much is the driveway....I think if you cropped a bit of it out in the image and maybe added some dirt/cracks in photoshop, it will really sell the photorealism more. Its really looking great though.
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Agree with Steelers here the driveway just needs a bit of messing and maybe an entry apron to the front door!
Great image and mood mate, I'd watch your verticals! And everyone is into this bird thing (it's taken over from bloom
).Mate must say I really like the building too, has that 60's look that I love here in Aust from the period!
Looking forward to seeing how you continue to polish this up!!
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Hi all
Thanks for your time and comments. Ive tried to include them in my new render. Really not happy with the sky. I know what I want, just havent been able to find the perfect image on the internet. Its abit of a cross between the two.
Look forward to hearing your comments.Jonathan
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been watching this... really great, cant believe its your first night image with vray. i love the little detail of the leaves laying in the driveway.
i think i'm with you on the sky.. the first is a little less distracting and a bit brighter...but, its such a small minor thing.. new sky still looks good.
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Thanks Jason
It maybe my first night render, but I spent alot of time on it. Not at all a profitable job. But great learning experience. At least I'd be able to do the same job in a third of the amount of time next job.
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