School Building

skyscraper100

hi!

this is my practice render using vray for sketchup, add some comments/suggestions about it thanks a lot! btw im a 16 year old aspiring architect, ill take up arki this year so wish me luck!

hvanessen

Nice building, but a little bit to dark. Normaly you should turn the lamp on when its dark outside.

It looks also that there are no windows on the backside of the building. Perhaps the students can learn better without any

For the rest i like it a lot.

delineator

hi skyscraper100

try adding windows along the columned areas on the ground floor, sky would be another one. if the school would be in an urban area, try adding some mid-rise buildings to the background, but if its in some rural area, something nature-oriented would be appropriate for the backdrop. your rendering is a good start for your career, keep up the good work!! practice makes perfect, but why practice when no ones perfect!! hehe!!

if you're going to take up arki, be prepared for nights without sleep due to plates, 3 nights would be maximum. I have been there!

Good luck bro!!

FoXar

Looking good although I think the building looks a bit narrow, btw good luck with your arki!
I'm 17 years btw ;D

skyscraper100

@unknownuser said:

Nice building, but a little bit to dark. Normaly you should turn the lamp on when its dark outside.

It looks also that there are no windows on the backside of the building. Perhaps the students can learn better without any

For the rest i like it a lot.

thanks for the tips, glad you like it thank you fro dropping by

skyscraper100

@delineator said:

hi skyscraper100

try adding windows along the columned areas on the ground floor, sky would be another one. if the school would be in an urban area, try adding some mid-rise buildings to the background, but if its in some rural area, something nature-oriented would be appropriate for the backdrop. your rendering is a good start for your career, keep up the good work!! practice makes perfect, but why practice when no ones perfect!! hehe!!

if you're going to take up arki, be prepared for nights without sleep due to plates, 3 nights would be maximum. I have been there!

Good luck bro!!

thanks a lot for that good tips! ill update this if i have time, glad you like it
haha yeah i heard that, thanks! good luck to your arki career too

skyscraper100

@foxar said:

Looking good although I think the building looks a bit narrow, btw good luck with your arki!
I'm 17 years btw ;D

thanks for the comment and gud luck dude