External Visuals [WIP]
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Very nice - the corbels arent getting any better with the brick render!!!
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I was nearly in tears when I started drawing them into the elevations
but what client wants client gets
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Looks fine, and if the client is happy....Why don't you modify this project into a "killer" , only if it is for your own pleasure?
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hmmmm....
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thnaks a lot james. I haven't drawn everything to (exact) brick dims yet...its almost there but not quite. theres been about 10 revisions! also the texture isn't stretched to standard brick dims eitehr its like 3 mm out at the moment. I know some of the fenestration is unsettling to this elevation in size and relative orientation but I can't do anything about it....its really frustrating-this could be an absolute killer of a house. but then again the client is blown away and loves it! you can't win either way!
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Yeah man! Doing those high box features out of brick just seems heavy and depressing - Oli I can feel your pain! I must say in situations like that I just tell the clients "NO I'm not doing it, whether you like it or not, just no!".
Mate you have a funny halo around the background trees (like bloom
) and that brick map just looks a bit plastic not sure why!The grass looks great!!!
Well done Oli!!
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Hi people here is another angle:
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This second image looks a bit dark. You have lost definition on the left side of the building.
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The shadows on the tree line in the background doesn't match the sun position in the render...
The ground material seem too flat...I'm sure that a mixture between NPR and the render will compliment this scene much better...
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well this is north elevation. this whole side would be in shadow but I kinda faked it so some of it was in sunlight. maybe I shoulda done it with sun off for more overcast appearance. I cant do a NPR render because its in a set of two other (more) realistic renders. cheers for comments they help me improve!!
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Yeah mate what is happening in the shadows there?? Could be someone hiding!
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Here is the final of the three images:
I couldn't spend longer than a couple of hours on it I'm afraid so please excuse the mistakes here and there!!
I think the images look great as a trio on a drawing sheet, in isolation they are not so spectacular. Remember these are just for planners to get an idea of the building form. I think I went a bit OTT, again!
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Hi Oli
They look pretty good to me - and if they get the house passed for the client then Job done!!
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and all 3 together:
frederik: perhaps now you can see why I couldn't do just one NPR image on this sheet, it would stand out too much.
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Great images
I really want to walk with bare feet through that grass.
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Still needs some shadows and highlights filtering on that middle one mate! Still so dark!
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its cool i've done it to the printed version cos it was too dark
so thanks for pointing it out! I didn't have time to re-render 
but they look fab on paper!!cheers holmes......but keep off the grass
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lol nice..........sunny day, grass on the grass..... not forgeting the bare feet
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