Poliszuk model by Phmeier

[phmeier]

Well uhmmm,, it was modeled by a friend and modeled by me ... ive modeled the roof only !!!

Please.. let some comment !!! C-ya dudes !!

1-) Model from Maicon martins ( Poliszuk)

2-) Render by me Philippe Meier ( phmeier)

Rendered with vray and after production with PS ...

C-ya !

[remon_v]

hey,

very very nice render. It's just a complete render. Nice ligting and the sky.
my c&c's are. The wall on the right is a bit faced. Did you apply the material to the group?
and my other c&c is the roof has got to little(or none) variation which makes it a bit unrealistic. Oh and maybe the bike is a bit to shiny... it draws my attention a bit to much.

cheers remon_v

[kwistenbiebel]

I would go easy on adding the bloom.
Also, lowering the viewpoint a little could improve the realism.

Besides these minor remarks, a very nice result! Good job.

[olishea]

yeah great image but i'd lose the flare off the motorbike, or just reduce it. it catches your eye immediately.

[phmeier]

wel.. thank u all .. keep doing that!!!

Well.. i will reduce the flare..

Uhm,,, about the faced wall.. i havet applyied to the group but the face. I am not enjoying that faced wall too ...

And about the roof. . could u give any adivice about hpw to variate it ? Só at my next project i can pay more attention on that !!!

Thank u all guys !!

[olishea]

make each roof plane a group then use FFD to distort it a little bit.

[phmeier]

FFD is some plugin ? Sorry guys sometimes my english can make jokes with me ...

[remon_v]

yes FFD is free plugin

[phmeier]

Thanks i will look for it !

[olishea]

look at silvershadow's "the river runs thru it"

he uses FFD to give irregularity to the roof tiles. there are some screenshots available.