Primary school
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Looks good.
I trust you are studying architechture as your landscape looks a little bare
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why did you stop at just vertical gardens? why didnt you go for a complete green solution, green roof and drop the whole building down into the ground some?
whens the final crit?
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I may not be a fan of the architecture, but good model. what program did you use for rendering?
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@tobobo said:
I trust you are studying architechture as your landscape looks a little bare
I thought to make landscape a bit more impresive but unfortunatly my sketchup was strugling already with this model and I could not bother put something more… I was thinking that I may make some changes in the photoshop but it never happen… maybe because landscape was not so immportant in my project.
@sir said:
why did you stop at just vertical gardens? why didnt you go for a complete green solution, green roof and drop the whole building down into the ground some?
I was thinking about this option as well but I did not want to make roof accessible for pupils so that why I did not go for fully green solution.
@troyhome said:
what program did you use for rendering?
Kerkythea
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Your professors might criticise you about the parking lot, as it is impossible to park even a Smart there if the driveway is only about 2.5 m wide. The space fits only two rows of cars. And IMO the shape should be integrated with your overall design (curved).
The renders look somewhat underexposed and the light too hard on my screen.
Anssi
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@anssi said:
Your professors might criticise you about the parking lot, as it is impossible to park even a Smart there if the driveway is only about 2.5 m wide. The space fits only two rows of cars. And IMO the shape should be integrated with your overall design (curved).
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Maciek.. I thought you would have been using Podium.. That is why we have them installed on the comps...Kerky is good though
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@sepo said:
Maciek.. I thought you would have been using Podium.. That is why we have them installed on the comps...Kerky is good though
I was doing my renders at home and I do not have podium unfortunately. I know that my renders are not so great but I will keep going to do better.
@sepo said:
BTW for the record I am not Maciek's tutor.
Anyway I should come to you for some advises about my renders but I was too busy with other coursework…
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No problem...I am at Uni on Thursday with 3rd year Interior design.
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I like the creative approach to your design, and the stark(?) renders compliment it. How about posting a plan, I would like to see how you tied the spaces together. A interior render of the skylight space would also make a nice study.
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