Some Recent Exteriors
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Here are a few new scenes from a recent project. As always, comments and critiques are welcome and greatly appreciated. Hope you enjoy.
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hi steeler i think on first image grass texture looks a little weird and people dont blend very well, 2nd image has too much noise, but 3rd image is very good!
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I agree. Cut the saturation a little. Nice job on the models!
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Thanks guys, now that I look at these on my monitor at work I see what you mean about the saturation and color balancing with the people...my laptop really isnt doing me any justice when doing post processing. Will work on em and udate hopefully
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for some reason I really like the second image, the noise and saturation just seem to fit for me!
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frisken - thank you for the kind words...that image is kind of one of those things that I guess you either like or you dont, but I am glad u do
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I agree with the other comments--but the thing that caught my eye is more of an architectural crit. In image number 1 it seems that the proscenium around the entry should be a different material than the brick. That doesn't seem to work for me. I would look at that being a contrasting material.
Also the underside of the canopy in image three seems a little busy.
just some thoughts.
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great brick texture, it receives the light really well
i agree with david's comment - the cantilever at the top of the entry is a strange brick condition
the second image looks awesome - like some 70's building was retrofit with a new screen on the outside
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