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    • marked001M Offline
      marked001
      last edited by

      thanks eric...and this thing is hardly fantastic! i'm strugglling with it.. obviously. i think the client may have given up on me, as i havent heard from them in 4-5 days... oh well πŸ˜‰

      i did have more shrubs originally.. but they wanted more colorful flowers... maybe because the rest of the image is so boring? who needs reality... i am, ultimately, going to pshop some reflection in those windows... i was going to look for an hdri, but i cant deal with the time it takes to keep rendering and adjusting til its right πŸ˜•

      http://www.revision21vis.com

      instagram: revi21on

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      • boofredlayB Offline
        boofredlay
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        Well if they wanted it more colorful then it is right.
        I hope they are just on vacation or something like that. πŸ˜‰

        http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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        • brodieB Offline
          brodie
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          Yeah, the worst part about doing this sort of thing for money is that sometimes with clients there's just no accounting for taste. What can you do?! πŸ˜’ Wish I had time to just do pretty kitchen renderings and bathrooms like you see all over the rendering forums. Just can't figure out why these people take so much time to render those sorts of things. Are they making money on it? Who's paying all this money for bathroom images? Oh well, some of us are stuck doing exteriors of not so interesting buildings like banks and hospitals - could be worse. πŸ˜‰

          -Brodie

          steelblue http://www.steelbluellc.com

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          • marked001M Offline
            marked001
            last edited by

            haha...yeah, i wonder that too brodie.

            gotta pay the bills πŸ˜„

            http://www.revision21vis.com

            instagram: revi21on

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            • marked001M Offline
              marked001
              last edited by

              here's the latest...


              Lot8.jpg

              http://www.revision21vis.com

              instagram: revi21on

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              • boofredlayB Offline
                boofredlay
                last edited by

                Very good. Bravo.

                http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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                • C Offline
                  cadmunkey
                  last edited by

                  Top notch, its come on leaps and bounds since you first posted. Good stuff, what renderer do you use?

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                  • marked001M Offline
                    marked001
                    last edited by

                    yeah, little bit of a progression.... just didnt have the skill to totally get rid of that tile in the brick πŸ˜• going to do one more update with a sky minus that big ass cloud....

                    this was done in Maxwell.. sky and reflections were added in post.

                    http://www.revision21vis.com

                    instagram: revi21on

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                    • brodieB Offline
                      brodie
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                      looks very good marked. My only comment would have been on the sky and it sounds like you're taking care of that πŸ˜„

                      Good job on the reflections too!

                      -Brodie

                      steelblue http://www.steelbluellc.com

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                      • marked001M Offline
                        marked001
                        last edited by

                        ONE more time.... haha.


                        Lot8.jpg

                        http://www.revision21vis.com

                        instagram: revi21on

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                        • marked001M Offline
                          marked001
                          last edited by

                          this doesnt really deserve its own thread, so i'll stick it in here. here's another image of another building in this development...


                          Lot5_052109.jpg

                          http://www.revision21vis.com

                          instagram: revi21on

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                          • brodieB Offline
                            brodie
                            last edited by

                            good job Marked, I like the glass better in this one, maybe it's the mullions. Some tree reflections might help a bit imho but overall nice work.

                            Is this the building to the immediate right of your previous building?

                            -brodie

                            steelblue http://www.steelbluellc.com

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                            • marked001M Offline
                              marked001
                              last edited by

                              i initially had an HDRI with trees that was reflecting...but the sky was too dark...now that i'm typing this..i guess i could've used that one for reflection and the other for background..whoops...haha... i like the way this one came out way better than the first though...for some reason..

                              no, that one is already built...this is across the street, i think...

                              http://www.revision21vis.com

                              instagram: revi21on

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                              • brodieB Offline
                                brodie
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                                Already built? you guys are fast!

                                I don't know if this had anything to do w/ your sky issue but I find that I typically have to crank the Intensity of the HDRI image up to like 10-15 in Maxwell to get a nice bright day. I bought the HDRI pack from dosch (well, I had the company do it πŸ˜„ ) about a month ago and am really liking it so far. It's got the HDRI at various resolutions that I throw into the appropriate slots, then it's also got like 30 flat images of the same scene that can be used to photoshop in as a background (you could also use the 12,000 pixel HDRI in the background slot but it seems to bog things down.

                                I agree that this one looks better than the previous one. It seems a lot...fuller, or maybe richer? More trees in the background, more going on, nice composition, closer to the building, more dynamic shadows, etc. If your job is anything like mine I suspect many of the issues with your last one were due to restrictions put on you rather than any lack of skill on your part. Some buildings just seem to lend themselves better to coming out favorably despite the restrictions (show the whole building, show the site, don't let the windows on the bottom that are reflecting ground be darker than the ones reflecting the sky, make the flowers brighter, make the sky like this, etc).

                                -Brodie

                                steelblue http://www.steelbluellc.com

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                                • marked001M Offline
                                  marked001
                                  last edited by

                                  haha.. no no, the building to the right of the first rendered building is an existing building... i dont work in this office...so i dont really know what's going on.. but yeah, architects are definitely annoying to work with πŸ˜‰

                                  http://www.revision21vis.com

                                  instagram: revi21on

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