A start to my "Eye Candy", A.K.A. my senior project

[steelers05]

This is the first of hopefully many images for my senior project (Silvershadow:hope you dont mind me playing with your title ). It has been a project that started last semester with doing research, writing a paper, and obtaining a site for the project. This semester I am designing my last project of my college career...it is a nightclub/ultralounge. This image is of a lot of existing buildings (well pretty much all existing) but my club is the building located far back with the neon martini glass. Im not sure if i am going to keep that as my logo or not, but I just wanted to showcase how the building sits with the rest of the surroundings since there is an exterior patio and beautiful view of the city. This project is an interior design project and will last for the rest of the semester, but I will try to update this with my progress if people are interested? Please let me know what you think guys and critique me as much as you want, cause as much as possible will really help. Hope you like it. (For the best view click on the link)

http://www.flickr.com/photos/27604581@N02/3200821453/sizes/l/

[ScottPara]

Nice overall composition. A few things:

The people look out of scale
The ball lights are taking away form the image as they are too bright. They are the first pace your eyes goes to.
The camera angle makes it look like more of an arial of a movie set than real life.

Scott

[solo]

Good modeling.

I agree there is too much happening in scene that the focus is lost.
I am not a fan of using 2d people in a scene, however you may need it for this subject, but the blurring for motion effect does not work with people standing still talking on phones, or walking same direction as view, it does work for old lady bottom left.
The ball lights are distracting maybe lower the glow and make nightclub exterior wall lights brighter.

Looks like a fun project, I am sure the finished product will knock their socks off.

[steelers05]

Thanks for the feedback. I have to admit that these were all accurate suggestions so I tried to edit the image a little more. Hope it looks a lil better?