My first post- house rendering
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Hello every one! I'm quite new on this forum and this is my first post. Some old model witch I rerender and postproducte some days ago when I'm doing on new portfolio. Any comments/suggestions are welcome.
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Overall, nice rendering. A few points (IMHO):
- The people appear to have a white halo around them, and comparing them to the materials and the car, they look out of scale (too small).
- The gray wall in the background looks flat, devoid of any texture - doesn't look realistic.
- You have some light rays projecting from some of the top corners - why? It seems out of place in what looks like an otherwise photorealistic approach. If your going for a more mannerist style that emphasizes the form, you should use that approach on the whole form you want to emphasize.
- Water seems a bit too agitated for a swimming pool.
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