My house project

jarynzlesa

I think you have very good sense for photography (firs and last render). exterior renders awaken pleasant mood. it seem the lumion can make better exterior render than well known renders engines, but for interior is much better vray. super work, good luck with your project, cheers .

Speaker

Thanks. Whit Lumion I can make quick and nice renders, but they still need a lot of post procesing to make them really stand out, as a lot of detail is lost and there are many limitations to the render engine.

boofredlay

Very well done sir.

alexandersimple

Speaker,

Very good job on these renders. The only thing that jumps out at me from an architectural standpoint is that the sidewalk texture looks more like a wall texture than a floor texture. The main concern is the grout width. Other than that, excellent work. I like the lighting with Lumion.

EDIT: Ah, found one more thing.. the ramp to the garage. If you still have time to correct this, make the garage door go down to the level of the sidewalk/driveway. There would not be a full-height foundation wall under the garage door in a usual case.

GOOD LUCK! Looks like an "A" to me!

Speaker

A little too late to change something in the construction now.
I guess I made the pavement material a little bit too large, so it doesn't look too right now. I'll try to put something better on it.

Just made a quick render of the entry.

Speaker

Two days left to finish the project. Made some renders of the construction details.

I'll be preparing for an all-nighter now still a lot left to do...

srx

Nice details. Very detailed
Have you modeled the whole house this way?

Speaker

Not everything, just the few main parts. In the final presentation I'll also show the HWAC of the house and these images

watkins

How did you create the last images (roof structure etc). Layout? I like the way the other structures are show in light outline while the structure in question is highlighted.

Regards,
Bob

EarthMover

Nice work bro. The construction details are fantastic!

Speaker

Thanks!

Bob. I just merged togeather the render with some images of different sketchup styles in Photoshop.

Everything other then the interior and exterior visualisation were actually not in the assignment, but I wanted to make them so to help the future students to better understand the construction details. I know a lot of people that have dificulties understanding draftings, so I had an idea to make a library of these kind of images in my web page.

Speaker

Here is the full house.

Jhun

@speaker said:

Hey. I wanted to share some pictures I made for my final college project. The deadline is already in a week, so I thought maybe you could give me some last minute crits about them.

All made in sketchup. Rendered with lumion and vray.

i wonder for the tree... are you made it by your self, man i'm confused for the tree
cause i want to make a house with garden just like you, but i wonder how to make a tree, please tell me

Gaieus

@jhun said:

i wonder for the tree... are you made it by your self, man i'm confused for the tree
cause i want to make a house with garden just like you, but i wonder how to make a tree, please tell me

The exteriors, as Speaker said, are (mainly) Lumion3D where these trees are part of the rendering package:
http://vimeo.com/16534222

solo

@speaker said:

Here is the full house.

Sweet! I really like this style.

Humpmetwice

really impressive work an inspiration to an old metal building detailer!

thegreek87

@speaker said:

Here is the full house.

Really nice visual, Am I right in thinking the green and red ducts are part of a MVHR unit?

If so the only criticism I could offer is that the green supply valves in the far left corner would get whats known as cross talk, they should be staggered

Exceptional visual though