Depth or atmosphere in PR render

museummaker

Great comments everyone, I appreciate your time and input. I definitely need to work on my PS skills, I have only tapped the surface of what you can do in post processing, I spend a lot of time fidgeting with the render when sometime things can just as quickly be fixed with a few clicks in photoshop.

Richat-- just beginning to tap into manipulating nxtimages, the haze feature looks like it may come in useful for giving depth.

I'll post more soon, spent a little time modeling the tower that goes on top.

Thanks for the help

museummaker

Well, I ended up with something I am happy with for now. It's a combination if a HDRI rendering with an overlay of a Sun rendering for the shadows.

Not perfect but I learned a lot pulling it together.

After thinking about the comments I began to wonder--- am I trying to render what I think I would see, or what a photograph of the building might look like. They are different things I believe (?).

I guess in the end it is all a matter of personal preference and what you are trying to communicate.

Any thoughts? I haven't dabbled in much landscape & entourage before.

Roger

Use all the depth cues available to you.
You are only showing the front of the building, so you don't have any of the side receding in perspective toward the horizon.

Use overlap. Let a foreground tree overlap some of the building. Let some of the wall overlap the first row of steps.

Change the time of day so you can let longer shadows establish the perspective and also separate building from background.

The arbor and the gate look too small creating a reverse perspective.

The building is too white. A neutral color like white is going to pickup the color of the environment, especially in the shadows. The white building looks like a flat cutout pasted on the scene. I needs to acquire some of the coloration of the scene via reflected light.

Divide the scene into three layers. Closest layer jfully saturated mid layer slightly unsaturated far layer somewhat desaturated by atmospheric haze.

Add some object of known size in the background.

Your background trees may be too high, thus forcing the background foreward.

Why does the wall throw its shadow forward and the shadow of the building go backward?

Be careful with the sky. You can't just grab any sky. The field of view should match the render. You can't have a telephoto sky and a wide angle building or visa versa.

Have more texture in the grass and make sure it diminishes at the same rate as the perspective.

If you google "Country Church,"you will find hundreds of example photos to study and see how these comments might relate to each of the pictures.

Here is a possible interpretation of the scene.
Some suggested ideas

honoluludesktop

Lots of good advice here. I apply a couple of very simple rules I learned from hand rendering. With exterior scenes, objects on the horizon are atmospheric, lighter in value then the subject, and much lighter then foreground elements. The sky is the same, the portion on the horizon is lighter then at the top of the render. I pp the sky, and the objects on the horizon before placing them in the scene or the render. In addition to value, I often find that blurring the background elements helps to focus attention on the middle ground.

Don't forget the classical architectural photographic method of framing the subject with an overhanging branch. Not always applicable, but darker foreground feature often helps.

Too much graphic attention on minute elements on the model sometimes distracts from the subject itself. IMO, the right amount is best judged by eye.

I like computer rendering. Often my hand renders were judged as being too artistic. While I basically do the same things with computer renders, the illustrations are regarded as representing reality.

sorgesu

Again, from hand rendering: Atmospheric perspective is implied when items that recede in the background are both less detailed and become progressively more blue because the atmosphere particles between the viewer and the item viewed are thicker the more the depth.
When I was doing illustrations in Piranesi, it was very easy to apply all surface colours with a "depth" fade. I always painted over a white surface ( I was careful NOT to us a grayscale version of the colours applied in SketchUp because the grays then are not really shadow areas, they are the tonal value of the colours applied) with gray shading that I would change to a blue hue in areas in shade and a purplish hue on the sunward side,but that is a whole other topic. So that when the colours applied faded they would fade to whatevers was beneath, white generally so less saturated. As a second step, I would sample the sky colour and use a semi transparent version of it as a reverse fade toward the viewer: So more transparent blue far away and less so as you approach the viewer. I would paint bucket the background trees with this semi transparent blue which also would fade as the trees approach the viewer. Doint this would serve 2 purposes, the semi-transparent blue/white colour would de-saturate the background trees and also obscure the details as the colour shifs would merge close to the blue paing colour. I often exaggerated this, as artists often do, in order to really get the sense of depth.

This works with Photorealistic work as well and really does improve the image. However, this does not rely on sliders or settings or anything technical. It is something that is measured by the eye. It can be done in Photoshop as well because one can apply colours in fades, whether you have Photoshop 3D or not.

Changing the colours of the shadows and applying some reflected light (that is incorporating colours of items around the structure on the surface) would go a long way to making it look more like real life and less like CG, also.
There is an additional step. It has to do with focus. Entourage such as trees and plants is necessarily supplied at sharp focus as it is not possible to create sharp focus from difuse. The opposite IS possible however, and foreground details may be "DE-emphasized" so that it allows the viewer to focus on the central object. In my opinion "blurring" objects is NOT the same as less focus. In order to de-emphasize, I sample a midtone colour of the object that I am trying to lower in focus and paint bucket a semi-transparent version of this over that object. Again the colour distinctions begin to fade as the paint bucket makes them merge and the details are lost.

You don't need to use entourage out of the box, you can make it fit the purpose, the perspective and the lighting by using "paint".

I am attaching 2 pictures, a "Before" and "After" so to speak of an example used from my Chapter on Composition from Bonnie Roskes Piranesi Book.
Please note, the "Before" has many more things wrong with it from a compositional or rendering perspective, than were addressed in the "After". The "After" is NOT intended to be an exampler of a "fixed" or "good" rendering. What IS illustrated, amongst a few other issues addressed in it, is the result of some of this "atmospheric" as well as "de-emphasizing" paint bucketing.

museummaker

WOW all of this is fantastic advice and very helpful.

Stay tuned, I need to digest all of this.

Thank you for your time and insights. Still much to learn.

honoluludesktop

Susan, Regarding the following part of your post: "When I was doing illustrations in Piranesi, it was very easy to apply all surface colours with a "depth" fade. I always painted over a white surface ( I was careful NOT to us a grayscale version of the colours applied in SketchUp because the grays then are not really shadow areas, they are the tonal value of the colours applied)...." What's interesting was my recollection that as I render by color pencil, I often blend depth into the shadows with black, that for me, in the media of color pencils, tonal values were not enough. However rendering on a computer, I do not even consider this.

Sound like you put a lot more work, and care into your renders then I.

The first lesson my mentor taught me, was that illustration should not be limited by the number of colors you have access to. He then proceeded to teach me how to render with the smallest tin of pencils. Sigh....... times have changed:-), now I render with 16m colors.

museummaker

Just to follow up, I have tried to implement a lot of the useful suggestions.

I got the depth, now I need more detail in the foreground. grass is a pain

Thanks to all, any c&c is welcomed.

honoluludesktop

Patrick, Love that "view from the porch". Select the image below for a link to post, and discussion I did a while ago that may provide some other "fruit for thought".

Roger

@unknownuser said:

Just to follow up, I have tried to implement a lot of the useful suggestions.

I got the depth, now I need more detail in the foreground. grass is a pain

Thanks to all, any c&c is welcomed.

Patrick, very impressive improvement. Pretty much spot on. The only comments I would make are:
If the blue bldg is the prime subject I would crop away the right third of the scene. However if the village is the subject, I would leave as is.

Use a bump map to raise the cobbles in the street. I used to live next to a brick road and even after 50 years can still hear the tires whizzing over the bricks.

I would go for a cloud pattern than comes all the way forward to add to the perspective.

Hedges, open fences, some delineation at the property line?

Regarding grass, learn how to use the instancing brush (also NOTE TO SELF: I need to learn this too)or strip in photos taken at a golf course.

brodie

Wow, huge improvement here. Great job.

Here's the new C&C

Something weird going on with your handrail in the foreground there. On the left side it's very wide, then it seems to bypass the middle column and also gets really really thin. Not sure what's going on...reminds me of an M.C. Escher.
Grass is always hard. My tip, if you're going to do flat grass like that it to do some photoshop work to break it up. What really gives away the fact that the grass is a flat plane isn't so much the middle where you just see grass but rather at the edges where the grass meets the sidewalk, for example.

What I do is use the Clone/Stamp tool in Photoshop to clone some nearby grass and then change the brush from the normal round brush to an image of a few blades of grass (if you're using Photoshop there's a standard brush that works perfectly - if not you may have to create one yourself). Basically you just paint that along the edges where grass meets sidewalk and it fools the eye.

I'm not sure what material the road is. I'm guessing brick? Maybe some more variation and the coloring seems like maybe it's off.

-Brodie