Sharwe-sketchup-animation

[sharwe]

Hello, everyone!

Take a look at my sketchup animation!Put on your headphones!

My blog http://www.sharwe.com

艺术系教学楼设计sketchup动画表现

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[sharwe]

南京玄武湖湿地公园设计sketchup动画

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[ScottPara]

Sharwe,

It is quite obvious there is a lot of work involved. My comments are:

The trees and many other components are repeated so many time (not even scaled or rotated in many cases) that it becomes very obvious. You can get away with using the same tree or bush but you need to vary it in some ways.
The animation is very jerky. It should flow much smoother than it does.
I think there needs to be more color.
The animated sections don't add to the animation as it is not showing how the building is being built. You already show the insides of the structure in the animation to the sections seem to be not needed.

The reflections on the water are very nice.

Scott

[sharwe]

@unknownuser said:

Sharwe,

It is quite obvious there is a lot of work involved. My comments are:

The trees and many other components are repeated so many time (not even scaled or rotated in many cases) that it becomes very obvious. You can get away with using the same tree or bush but you need to vary it in some ways.
The animation is very jerky. It should flow much smoother than it does.
I think there needs to be more color.
The animated sections don't add to the animation as it is not showing how the building is being built. You already show the insides of the structure in the animation to the sections seem to be not needed.

The reflections on the water are very nice.

Scott

Thank you for your views, then I will be amended！